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Reviews for: Harold's Bad Luck with Balls
Eve4000
2002-12-02 . chapter 1
cool so far.
humble
2002-08-28 . chapter 1
All right continue... You just need to proofread a bit, it was a bit confusing at times. Its a good start, simple, but are you so sure Helga would care if Harold wa getting hit by balls. You probably have to get into a bit more detail.
TADAHmon
2002-08-27 . chapter 1
Interesting, although I wonder why Helga'd wanna help Pink Boy, too.
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