This is my first time reviewing. You write really good stories, and you should just keep writing fanfiction! Good story- you added very good details.

Well written. And although I wasn't too fond of the AI movie itself, this was a nice twist on it. Well done.

This story is the first of it's type that I've read and I thought it was absolutely wonderful!!! The details, the tone..everything was just right. You have tremendous skill. Never stop writing! :)

A really wonderful story .I am so glad you decided to continue this story the ending is sad,but I think Babbette was brave.The idea of "kid catchers" also sounds realistic

This a great story about what the Nanny mecha's life might have been like before she was abandoned in the woods.I hope you write more of this or perhaps another backstory about one of the flesh fair mechas.I also think giving her a french name was clever.I also think it would be a good idea to have Maddy come out in Zenon Eyes:Eyes of Truth.