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Reviews for: The Untold Series: Barthello
Matoko Shizaki 5/20/04 . chapter 1
omg! i'm so glad you wrote about them! - i know they're kind of an odd pair but somehow they were just meant to be. in fact, on the s.s. winno i could've sworn that they were making out... . go you! you're original!
btw, rikku and auron would be great -
Reno'sGirl 12/31/02 . chapter 1
write about Braska meeting his wife
Veggie 9/2/02 . chapter 1
This IS pretty good... Probably the BEST fic about Dona and Barthello out there!
Katarina Ariadne Navane 8/27/02 . chapter 1
Thank u for writing this! If someone didn't write this soon, then I would have to!I mean, it's really

obvious. If you look carefully in the basement of the s. , you can see dona and Bartello making out. That explains why if u talk to dona, she sais,

"some people can be so rude!" I'm way to lazy for that. There are TONS of un told stories. How about Lulu's journey with Lady Ginnem? Also, Just after you reach the Al Bhed's Home, Rikku cries over the death of some guy named Keyaku. Who was that guy anyway? Also, When Rin first sees rikku, he makes a sort of noise of recognition. I thinkin' a Rikku/Rin? What do u think? Also, when Auron first meets Rin, they have a little conversation. You know, "I could not leave a wounded man to die" Rin says this is happened at "the begining of braska's calm" meaning, I think, AFTER Auron died, since there are no travel agencies between when Yunalesca mortally wounded him, and at the foot of Gagazet where he died after Kimahri promised to take Yuna to Besaid. How did Auron get wounded? how did Rin find him?

All of these must be told, but I'm too lazy to write them. Will u do it 4 me? Pleeeze?
Tidus 8/27/02 . chapter 1
i loved the story! very nice, i thought that it was cool/cute... if that makes sense... but then again... i'm nto ranked high in the brain order
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