 shyfoxling 9/20/10 . chapter 4"the deep and dark joy of knowledge."
Ooh yes. Wonderful way to put it. Very Severus.
I like how even given the truly Dark propensities he has in this fic, Severus still doesn't really want to be a Death Eater. |
 shyfoxling 9/20/10 . chapter 3I don't know if you will ever see this review as the story is now so old, but what the heck. Even given the various bizarro-world-feeling differences between what we now know is canon and what you've written (such as pureblood Severus with a brother named Septimus and the scene with James telling Sirius to stop fighting Severus), I rather like the writing and the characterization of Severus - even though that too is off from what I would now consider to be proper after 7 books. It's like looking at it from a whole different angle. |
 deeps85 4/25/10 . chapter 13i had to finish it today after i started it in the evening. nice job done with the story. awesome |
 Emily 11/18/09 . chapter 1 i wouldn't say that you were crazy at all! i think that it was absolutely hilarious and very well done. The dialogue was fantastic - done very well in true JKR style. well done. I think the scene with the sorting hat was my favorite part. I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop the relationship between snape and Lilly. i know a lot of other authors have written about them being friends - even snape being in love with Lilly. there is some fantastic fan art around with it too.
thanks again for the story, looking forward to hearing more from you. |
 last exile 10/12/09 . chapter 11 wow its awefully fantactic
we snape fans should thank you in that there's finally a great
chance to read a terribly wonderful story like this...
have you ever thought about continuing this story?
sorry for my poor English |
 inkeyes7 8/4/09 . chapter 13This is a great story. Normally I don't really like those about Snape's childhood as it's more or less already been spelled out for us, but here you have come up with some very probable incidents, while maintaining perfectly his character. (something which about 90% of fanfiction writers seem unable to do)
I think my favorite part was the Sorting - I can imagine without difficulty his reaction to be exactly what you had written.
And I also go by what the other comments have said; you're writing is truly very good. Congratulations. More to come? One can only hope. |
 Rowanne 4/9/08 . chapter 13 Fantastic...absolutely, completely wonderful. I wish had the sense of Snape's complex character that your talents have written into this story. You have a true talent in writing and I hope you continue. I would happily wait in line for your autograph. |
 Lunatique 11/22/07 . chapter 1Thanks to everyone for the nice reviews! I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. I haven't been able to access the Earthwalk account ever since I lost the password and the e-mail host I used went under, but feel free to contact me through this account if there's something you'd like to contact me about. |
 arien043 10/8/07 . chapter 13That was an incredible story! Snape is my favourite character, and you portray him perfectly. Kudos! A sequel now, perhaps? |
 Katalla 10/2/07 . chapter 13Really wonderful story.
Is there anyway to contact you? |
 Hazel 7/31/07 . chapter 13 Thank you so much! After the final book i felt somewhat empty... Your writing is really amazing. Even if english is just my second language it was easy to read your story and i couldn't finish until i reached the end. I really fits into JKR plot. Once more thank you.
Yours sincerly
Hazel |
 Malfoy's Kitten 7/5/07 . chapter 1love it |
 anon 12/2/06 . chapter 6 really enjoying it so far |
 Ada Kensington 8/9/06 . chapter 2Even though I'm now writing my own version of Snape's years at Hogwarts, I'd just like to say that this is still my all-time favourite account of them. Your young Severus is, psychologically, the most realistic I have yet encountered and I must say that you have an uncommon gift for twisting your way into your characters' minds, so that we humble readers are privy to what's going on - such an uncommon gift, in fact, that I have yet to read anything better by a published author.
It is truly fantastic. The original and still the best (even after OotP and HBP).
- Ada K. |
 hpottercrazy 11/21/05 . chapter 4this is a great story!i've been waiting for the longest time for a story about severus' past,its realistic and masterful writing! |