 Marisa Chmilar 7/15/01 . chapter 1 Read your short introduction allicat,and think it has promise,hope you continue to write the rest of the story. |
 James Birdsong 4/17/01 . chapter 1 :P |
 Athy Ak 1/13/01 . chapter 1 Show me da chapter! Show me da chapter!I wanna see more! I wanna see more! |
 Ly the werewolf 10/18/00 . chapter 1 Hmmmm... |
 Ami 10/18/00 . chapter 1 Cool man, you people need to make your chapters LONGER! |
 Princess Kara 10/17/00 . chapter 1 That was good. I can't wait to read more. |
 Jen 10/17/00 . chapter 1 EEEeeenteresting. Can't help but wonder who in the heck this girl is. |
 Christa the Ice Priestess 10/17/00 . chapter 1good
but that was an awful joke, time shifter snip helping a barber *groans softly* |