PLEASE UPDATE! please please please...

Nice, with a good blend of humor and seriousness.

Awesome fic. The characterization is wonderfully constant :)

Oh wow this was good! It's so amusing to see Knives suffer under Vash's "mockery" and how easily disgusted he gets by certain things... he's such a prude! hah! Anyway, I really liked this! You write beautifully!

You really should update this; I can just picture Myrel and Vash's room next door to Knives...and he hears them "fornicating" as he put it.

I wonder who Knives could be paired up with...knowing Vash he would get one HECK of a laugh picking out a "girlfriend" for his big brother. I would have to say that Milly would be the best choice for Knives. Doesn't hold anything agenst people, will keep him in line from insulting his brother since she is strong on the family subject.

Until you up date this will be on my Alert, Authors and Favorites lists.

The typical humor, the undeniable underlying angst, the flawless portrayal of the two brothers... make for one powerful story. Arigatou yo, for a good read.

Oh, fabulous. Best treatment of the anime's aftermath I've yet read. Definitely an addition to my favorites list. Thanks!

Wow, what an excellent way to spend my time! Very nicely done, esp. in re: to the dialogue. It's perfect as a one-shot, so I'm hesitant to request more just to satisfy my own lust for good fanfiction, but...well, if the "Trigun" muse happens to wallop you over the head with inspiration again, by all means, go with it! This fic was a little gem.

Hee hee! You somehow managed to capture both Vash and Knives... awesome.

heh. Nice. The constant shocks to his system will do him good.

Oh-hoho, this amuses me greatly. XP I like how Vash doesn't back down from any barb. Awesome work.

*loves*

Heh, poor Knives. ;

firedraygon97

Oh, I like! Please, continue this. I love reading fics like this. Please!

Oh, I like! Please, continue this. I love reading fics like this. Please!

Fantastic! I can't possibly tell you how perfect this was...I don't know...it was great doesn't seem to cut it, but I have nothing else I can say, so it was *great* and more!

LivEviL

Hi there. :)

I found this story a while ago, forgot to review. I just found it again and added it to my favorite stories list so I won't loose it again.

This is a great story! I really like your work. :)