Hey, cool, I like it! It turned out to be a lot different than what I expected. I like the ending, everything just fits together... Good job!

lol This story is pretty good. Cherish, gurl settle down. I've never seen u this angry before. lol This is the gayest fight I've ever seen! What the hell has happened to freedom of speech! Why don't u all just let Nicole or whoever say what they want, and Cherish ur taking this way harder then Marilyn! It's her damn story anyways people! Not any of yours! lol It's just sooooo funny how you can come back day after day after day, and b**** about the same thing! ::points at people that are angty with Nicole:: You should know pain is what makes us as human beings grow stronger, so maybe what Nicole wrote was for Marilyn's own good. But when it becomes an obsession, then u have problems! So please people who have wrote over five reviews just for ths story, drop ur damn pride and take it like a true person! (no one is paying me to say this and I don't care if anyone here I know is going to stop being my 'friend' just because of how I feel about such achildish situation) Have a nice day!

Good story. I like how you put an episode in it.

Hey that was good! I liked how you put Tyler in before AND after Gary's room was burnt down! Keep writing! :c)

Some people just never learn, do they? :-) Good story. Would like to see more from you.

Wow, that was really good. I'm glad you already wrote part 2, cuz I'm gonna read it now. I can't wait to see what happens!