And everyone died.

Very good in a morbid sort of way.

Wow. Write more...I like it. Do you mean to imply a relationship between Ron and Harry? Gasp. Just one question- why is Ron cooling Harry's brow? Got to know, write me back...my email's at my profile on this website. I think your plot sequence could be slightly improved, but not really.

this made me cry.

i can't even begin to list all the things that made this a haunting, wonderful work of art.

i wish i could write with a fraction of your talent.

Deep, girl. Deep. Thumbs up.

I liked this; the dialogue and interaction between Harry and Ron seemed very natural. I found it to be a little confusing, though, particularly at the end when I couldn't decide whether Voldemort was on his way or had already been defeated. I don't think the inclusion of lines from "The Hollow Men" added much, either; you have to be careful with that sort of quotation lest you come across as pretentious. Aside from those two issues, however, I really liked this. Thanks for writing.