sigh .. i'm guessing you're never going to continue with this?

its a shame, it a great piece of writing. rock solid imagery and twisted enough to appeal to all the darknesses i try to keep hidden from casual sight. i'll keep waiting for a continuation, but this is my offical notice that i'm no longer holding my breath because i need it to keep on living.

:)

You are amazing. This darker characterization of Zell _fits_ better. I like him, when usually I can't bear to read about him. Hee..:) you are amazing.

Very lovely so far, and an excellent choice of music too. Pink Floyd is well suited to the tone and writing style. I can't wait to see where you take this.

Stupid Zell. That'll teach him to drink so much.
Beautiful description once again, nice play of emotions (once again) :) I see a pattern here.. lol ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter. But like I said before, I hope to see a little more interaction.

Jeez, if he gets like that just from the first three letters of Squall's name, I wonder what he would do if Squall actually talked to him (and that doesn't mean orders or "Whatever").

You took long enough to get round to writing but this is well worth it, love the way you're working Zell's character. Also love all the great metaphors, makes the work obviously yours, keep it up hon, I look forward to more soon.

The dream was pretty thought provoking (hopefully you meant it as such, 'cause that's what I did. lol). I'm assuming it's SquallxZell? What with the ice mentioned. :) Very well writen so far. I hope to see chapter two up soon, with a little more interaction between the characters. I like Zell's POV so far. Keep up the awesome work :) I really can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^