all i can say is wow. i loved the story. i could feel his emotions clearly. it was well written. great job.

I love this story so much! It's very in-character and delves so deeply into Yukito's psyche. And I love how you examined Yue as well - he's not just a perfect magical being, he has feelings and problems.

I also adore the friendship between Imiyo and Yukito. It's a beautiful story and very well-written. I wish you luck with all of your other works.

This is really interesting. I prefer slow progression as well. _ Building up.

i just read this all in one go and it sounds like the same sort of thing me and my so called 'other half' went through Very good!

For one of the first times since I found , Yue is portrayed as human. It's amazing how well you did.

Sure this is kind of cool. but i think you should use the actuall names of the characters from the anime.

Its nice like your previous chapters.

I really like how you protray Yukito's character, its very deep and insightful. Your therapist is quite a character; makes me wonder how she'll react when she weaves her way deep into Yukito's mind. I think she personally might regret it, but as a counselor it'll be wonderful experience.

Your style of writing seems quite straight forward without much details surrounding. The emotions are nearly bland but it could be an advantage to over writing it. Trying to force the readers to feel a certain emotion usually backfires.

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Notorious Contempt.

Damn...that was one hell of a prologue. You have an amazing way to make your words flow. Its really nice to begin the whole thing off by what first impression made on the counselor. Judging is a typical thing humans do when they see someone, even a person they hardly know.

I like how you didn't place much details on the counselor. Often its helpful when building a mental picture of a character/person you hardly know. The thoughts running through her head is interesting and meaningful for the story.

Its nice that you have a knowledge MPD/DID. Its always better to write what you know about, it places a better flow for the story.

I know you finished this off a long time ago, but I think I'll review nearly all the chapters.

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Wonderful work. A lot of your fics have a brutal truth to them, and I like that. XD I'm glad you decided this was a worthwhile topic to write about. Please write more soon. Your work is great appreciated.

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This was an excellent fic; I enjoyed reading it.

Is it Kana from Fruits Basket, or just a random woman named Kana?

Homosexuality aside, this looks like a very good fic. Interesting idea, comparing the Yukito/Yue concept to MPD.

Wonderful Story!

Can't wait to read the sequal.

you are going to think me incredibly nit-picky, but just wanted to point out to you that Paradise Regained is written by Milton. Dante wrote Inferno. That's all. Otherwise, i think this is an incredibly well done and interesting story. D

Your ending... is very good. I was wondering how it all would play out since Yukito can't become all Yue or himself. _ It's hopeful though, and I like it a lot.

It's also very hard to create an original character like you did and tell the entire story in her pov, while still managing to form a clear picture in the reader's mind but I love the way you did it! You did a wonderful job and it was a joy to read. Yukito's angst is well based and your diagnosis' were well-founded. This fic is a great read, thank you so much for writing! _