lol loved it

:')

No words can express how much I loved this.

GOOD JOB! -

... Listen Zim! Pay attention to the last result!

Haha! Dibs an idiot for trusting Zim! Aww Gir is so cute! Wow, Zim in love is adorable

Wow!Zim's an idiot. Ha, her 'fruit' huh? Lol

that was awsome! and exactly how zim would react

aww, this was cute AND hilarious!

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! I LOVE IT!

At my town carnivals, its called The Zipper(and i love it!)

lol! That was totally worth the 15 minutes of my life wasted! I LOVE YOU! I want more.

Reviewd during the update period 2 am t0 3am...Yes... I'm up late.

Chapter 1

First Time I passed by this chapter I was like nahh dont' feel like reading it then realize..the

second time comming her that it's not that bad. The characters are in character, it's easy and

flowing...I can image it in my head...that's what counts.

Ha ha ha the last paragraph was hilarious! So Zim!

Chapter 2

Haha...I like the whole begin starting with his pace which lead into Zim's thought process to paranoia.

Then that smirk about p0pc0rn. LOL. OMG that man took off that is so cannon...at least I think so.

'Is her face about to explode?'

Ha ha ha lol xd!

The ride that you described in our amusement park (where I live) was called the SkyDiver' however most older

rides all had different names for the same ride. IT's basically a Ferris Wheel with two person gondolas' that spin

in place while the wheel turned. Unless you mean coaster wheels such as Coney Island and Disneyland, where

the gondola slid toward the middle as the wheel turned.

Okay back to simple review time.

Chapter 3

LOL, that was so cute... Especially Gir... she's so funny..."How was your date?"

Haha Evil p0pc0rn!

I have to say, I loved that last line.

"Yes, and Im sure the popcorn will love you too."

I cracked up!

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This is great! After a few years, IZ is still goibg strong in the hearts and minds of the fans. Please write a sequel soon, Toni.

I'm not into fanfics, but compared to some other others I've read this is one of the better ones. Captured the characters fairly well, although in some parts ZIM sounds more like a curious Caption Olimar than a paranoid alien. And Gaz seemed a bit more clueless about ZIM than she does in the show, but...overall nice job :)