Great story you have here. Very interesting, and original. I'm kinda sad that the story has been updated recently, and I hope it doesn't stay that way for long. The chapters are pretty long, mind making it a little shorter? Be kind to my eyes please?

I'm wondering if that girl is Katy...

Update soon, please?

Rufus is so cute here.

I'm really liking this story so far. One of the things I really like about this story so far is that Reno is not a total slob. For someone who is supposed to take his job seriously, I can't imagine him being a slob. Nor can I imagine anyone living like that because they choose too. It's nice to imagine him in a nice, appreciated abode.

Please please please finish this! Im loving the story so much you have to carry this on. I understand however that it's been a while since updated but still... X

Hey I just finished reading chapter 11 after starting to read this fic two day's ago, And I think it is fantastic, more than that, one of my favourite stories of all time. There really isn't much I can write to say how entertaining moving and fascinating I find the story and If there was one thing to complain about it would be that I'm getting a bit upset that it's ending in two chapters time. Other than that its brilliant and as I said previously one of the best Stories I've Read EVER! x Keep up the good work

It just keeps getting better,and who can not like this chapter when Reeves is in it. Only for a little but still...yey!

It so funny that she got all worked up about there being carpet.

Probably the best first chapter I've read in a while.

Hello, hello,

Sorry I just felt like typing that twice.

Anyways what is it going to take for you to continue this story? I believe I reviewed all the chapters. I'll check after I write this. If I can I will review all the chapter again. I was going to re-read this story anyways because it has been a while.

I'm really good at drawing so if you get inspired by looking at fanart then I'll be more than happy to draw you some for this story. My e-mail is

I'm here to help and to pester you along to update this story! Bye,bye!

This is a really good story I'm glad I accidently found it when I was Googleing something else and took the time to read the first chapter and then go back to my search but it was so good that I even saved it on my computer and have it favourited and didn't even bother about my search. Keep up the great stories.

Hi!

Update this you villinous fiend! I read this fiction about 6 months ago and have waited patiently for an update! Enough is enough - either contiune, or when I move to England and personally strap you to a computer! Ever seen the movie "Misery"? huh cause your looking at a reinactment including me as the crazy fan and you the hosatage writer!

XD

Anyway, hun I haven't reviewed before on this fic. but I am now to tell you to continue, you have many a fan waiting for an update! I love this story, it is well and truly awesome but please finish it! Well this has been less than an intelligent review (I'm normally all grammar, spelling, bla bla etc.) but please motivate yourself.

Lots of admiration

G xx

p.s. Jeez louis, you've been up to alot of cool stuff! Gun handeling? Marriage? Leaving home? My goodness it's like Hollyoaks (My fav. english program), your life's almost better than your fic. Yikes. Anyway drop me a line and give me a rough idea of when I should crack out the update-party poppers.

Ohmanohmanohman! It's...been...UPDATED! OMFG! This little teaser is way too tease-y! I need MOAR! I'm so happy you've put back on the yoke that is "Shinra Employee #4127", because this was always my favourite FFVII fanfic! I anxiously await the rest!

Oh. My. God.

I remember reading this fic WAY back when.

Oh wow this is so good your so one of the best writers on Fanfiction in my book! i love your OC and am praying that you write more so please update the suspense is KILLING me!

love this story im mean its so GREAT! love Reno's hair teehee pweze update i want more chapters i'll even use my puppydog eyes OO pweze this story is on my favvies