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god of all
2009-08-29 . chapter 32
Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon.
Ryuus2
2009-08-12 . chapter 32
I hope that you can lift the hold on this amazing story soon.

I look forward to more incredible works from you.
rollingWater
2009-06-18 . chapter 20
About the author's notes in the chapter... Hermione's boggart is revealed during the third year exam (her failing all her exams) and a watch would work in Hogwarts if it was mechanical, not electric(Harry had one in 4th year at least).
Lady Vandelle
2009-04-29 . chapter 7
Please excuse my ignorance. I was not paying attention when I started reading. (I was more concerned about reading what I found to be a great catch of a story, too excited to pay mind to the when and how...)

It's been very exciting so far. I must thank you! Thank you so much!

I'm going to keep reading. I'll try to remember to review, but I make no promises, considering how enthralled and focused on finishing the story I feel. I mean no harm from it, I am simply a forgetful person. *sigh* On the plus side, I do tend to make up for it with insightful reviews, right? Hopefully? ;;^o^

Thank you for the story. Unbeatable luck to you!

With Love,
Lady
Vandelle, Lady
2009-04-29 . chapter 6
I'm glad for your well-researched and discrete use of Japanese words interspersing the dialogue. It adds a foreign feeling while still being able to be read by English readers. :D Just the right amount, not overwhelming at all, and you even listed them at the end. Very nice.

I love the beautiful description of the Castle, and I can just picture how confusing navigating it would be for a guest. I anxiously await more!

A name for a magic school could be "Solas Academy", or "Lunas Academy". That sounds like a prestigious name maybe, or... Perhaps a more homely name relating to stars as in "Sol School". "Sol" is the name of the sun in the Milky Way Galaxy. "Luna", "Lune", etc. is relating to the moon.

Irrelevant to space, there could be names using references from mythology. "Eros" the greek god of love or something like that (it's a shame I'm too lazy to do my research) "Eros School of Magic". Other deities could be supplemented as well, but you get the point. Stuff like this is classy. :)

I hope I helped. I wish you the best of luck! I really enjoy reading this! (´°u°)/~~

Lotsa Love,
Lady Vandelle
Mēïkin
2009-04-29 . chapter 5
*BWAHAHAHAHA*

I loved the part where Mrs Dursley fainted.

Yeah, that was the best part (aside from the obvious, Lady taking Harry away)!

Thanks for the story. :D
power214063
2009-01-27 . chapter 32
please update soon. what happened? do they wake up soon?
Reviewer of the West
2008-12-18 . chapter 13
I like your story so far, but your school supplies do not make sense. Why would you need two identical hats for a growing child? Two formal robes (you have to assume formal wear is expensive) for any normal eight year old would be incredibly expensive since they are going to outgrow them so quickly. How many formal functions would a typical eight year old go to anyway? Why would the fashion for english and japanese wizards be identical anyway? Why would they be using books in english. Japenese children often learn egrish, which is similar to english but they are certainly not able to be taught primary in it as their primary langage. Why would the plants be the same between England and Japan anyway? Different climates means different plants. If they don't have wands, what in the world are they going to do with the standard book of spells? Broomsticks are purportedly very expensive, requiring the purchase of same for all children would be expensive.
Sure, *Harry* might need multiple dress robes and the like due to the status of Serenity-sama, but not everyone.
Please continue, though
YuriShi
2008-11-22 . chapter 8
I love your story! Its so good1 And original too i might add. But (and please note that I am taking Japanese) Nihon-Go means the language of Japan not Japanese like a Japanese person or place. I only ask that you change it to be right.
Sumimasen if this offends you. Arigato gozaimasu. YuriShi.
Taeniaea
2008-10-25 . chapter 32
Great Story Plz Plz Update It Soon!
cyiusblack
2008-08-07 . chapter 32
update soon
zeo knight
2008-02-28 . chapter 32
i like
Vilkath
2008-02-12 . chapter 18
Can't really say I enjoyed the logic of this chapter. On one hand I am glad the chapter length has increased, on the other you failed to really take Harry's abscence into acount. WHy are Hermonie and Ron friends? They could barely stand each other for several years, and frankly their relationship was always a question of how in the heck?

Without harry to hold them together, I never really understand how a lazy slacker with no care of any ones feelings and a slightly senstive book worm could possible get along long enough to become friends.

Then of course you have Draco being some sort of playboy.. thats just wrong.
Vilkath
2008-02-12 . chapter 12
Well the dragon lesson was interesting, but going all the way down to her oldest and most secret vault for some coins? Seems like a waste of time I kind expected her to give Harry some kind of Moon kingdom relic or something. Perhaps a moon cat familur hehe.
Vilkath
2008-02-12 . chapter 9
short, seems like chapters where nothing really happens end up being really small.
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