I noticed a few sentences in here that could be better phrased. Here they are, and what I would have put. You can ignore this if you like, I'm being picky and I know it.
"Still she said no word, and nor did her companion." This could be better put as "Still she said no word, and neither did her companion"
"they saw less and less other people." could be phrased better as "They saw fewer and fewer other people"
I hope these criticisms help, and that you take them the right way. I am enjoying your story(ies), partly because you stay true to the the style of Robert Jordan's books, and partly because you stay true to his legacy of originality by creating something new from the base of his world.

Good job. A very interesting story-within-a-story. Well written too. You do interesting things with the "raising" premise.

Do continue

keep 'em coming!!

What's going on?!? write faster! I MUST know!!!

Good story, i'm so sick and tired about anyone writing about the Arches always writes about Nynaeve; they just call her another name!
Good story, so why has no one reviewed it, ir do you remove them yourself?