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| Materia-Blade 2007-08-12 ch 14,  | abuseIt was an incredible fic. I'm kinda saddened that it wasn't an unstobably heart-breaking fic but I was very much impressed. The fact that it was one of your earlier works does show though. Sorry once again about all that. Let it be known that your fic is about thirty times better than mine. Heh. And Our Ideas were... alot different ya know? So out of curiousity do you have anything on the cooking pot for the future? Still waiting on a new Ranma-chan Fic. Chow! M-Blade |
| Morden Night 2006-10-14 ch 14, | abuseWow. Not a bad fic, but so incredibly obvious that it was almost painful to read. I knew the outcome of this fic since the first chapter. So... So painfully obvious. Oh gosh it hurts! Ha ha! Writing wasn't that good, and you kept using some poor japanese at parts, which is kinda dumb cause your readers aren't Japanese. Some of us understands it, but not all of us, keep that in minf for future fics, when writing English fanfiction, use English the whole way through, and the same applies for all other languages, Japanese written in Japanese, Mexican in Mexican, etcetera etcetera. Just so you don't get the wrong impression from me, let me assure you that I did enjoy the story, it was fairly original, it was just too flippin obious, poorly written(in a grammatical sense mostly), and had too much use of Japanese(any at all) Thanks for the read. Now I'll try to get back to writing my own fics. I've been seriously slacking on them. ha ha! |
| Ryoga's best friend 2005-12-11 ch 14, | abuseThat was masterfully done. This was how I figured it was, but even still you have me wavering about. A truely creative work. I like how you had hiroshi play a large part of the story, it's always nice to see the side characters get play. I would love to see a sequel if you ever get a proper idea for it. Keep up the amazing work... |
| LunaRoseAF 2005-11-22 ch 14, | abuseWow... awesome story. I never even thought of a plot like that! ~Luna |
| grey 2005-10-05 ch 14, anon. | abusegreat story o.o too short however |
| Raver Styx 2005-08-05 ch 14, | abuseDeath treats are something I should be sending you instead of a review, but... I wont. This fic is incredibly sad. The end was unexpected to say the least. I don't know what to say anymore... It left me empty. |
| FenixDown 2005-06-19 ch 14, | abuseMan, this fic is fantastic! I love it! and no need for a sequel... but if someday came out... |
| deitarion/SSokolow 2005-04-24 ch 14, | abuseThis is amazing. There were some problems at the beginning, (I'm pretty sure you spelled "furo" as "furrow") but I still think it's one of the best fanfics I've read in a while. You may also want to see the review I posted to my blog. It's at |
| Conna McCanna 2005-04-24 ch 14, | abuseAwesome story! I REALY hope you do a sequel!..I want to see what happens to him?her?them? I had a bit of an idea of what could have happened, and I think it is %100 in character for Ranma. Keep up the great work, and write more soon! |
| JohnnyG 2005-01-14 ch 14, | abuseThis was a truly excellent story. Both the concept, and the execution, were great. The only issue I had wasn't even your fault. It had to do with the fact that in the first ten or so chapters, the ellipses didn't form correctly, which made it a little difficult to read. This is actually a problem that this site had for quite a while, but eventually fixed. Anyhow, again, this was great work. I'll be sure to check out your other stories as well. Of course, I think I should get some of my own writing done first, before my readers track me down and lynch me. ;-) Best, ~JohnnyG |
| LeBibish 2004-10-15 ch 14, | abuseThat was absolutely *beautiful*. And I, for one, would love to see a sequel/expansion to this. |
| ______ 2004-09-15 ch 5, anon. | abuseThat was cool! But totally insane!~!~ |
| Logray Vadisi 2004-08-21 ch 14, | abusei really liked this story. has a lot of kewl twists and turns... will there be a sequal? |
| KoochiZibble 2004-08-14 ch 14, | abuseBrilliant! I really enjoyed reading this, and the twist near the end almost had me in tears. It must be so confusing for all three of them. ^_^ |
| CompMan44 2004-04-18 ch 14, | abuseMein Gott… amazing! I was floored; your story had me reading 'til the very end. It's an excellent psychological roller coaster, and the way you've written 'Akane' is pure genius. If ever you're published, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let us know! |