I like how you had Murdock and BA met.

i am going through reading all of the stories in the series that you and your partner have written.

I LOVE CASS... He is so sweet... Oh please let him be there in yoiur other stories..
oh a little critisism...I don`t knoe if that is the right word but you know what I mean...I sometimes had a little trouble with puuting people in the place... I always thought cass was the co-pilot.but that cold be my fault...
worms...

ooh, where to start, I'm only on Chap. 2 and I'm loving what you guys are doing. In the ep 'The Sound of Thunder' there are two fantastic b&w 'flashback' shots of Murdock in the pilot's seat, chewing gum and looking a little bored, like everything is run-of-the-mill - I really felt the way you portrayed him here matched that perfectly.
>>"Sometimes he sings opera." The temptation was too much. "Any requests?" >Murdock?" Cass asked gently.
"In a minute" was the almost inaudible whisper. He still didn't move.

Working my way thru the maze...slowly but surely. And no, I'm NOT calling you Shirley.

Oh I'm a sucker for a good Vietnam era fic and I lvoed this one to pieces.

Perfect characterisation of BA and Murdock and a nice level of detail in the realism department without bashing people over the head with it.

Wow! This is really good!

Super fic :D I noticed that here at ff.net there are only 2 of the series under your user name, I feel I am missing out ;) I really enjoyed your writing style. It was acurate without being in the least bit cliched. You really captured the characters and the interaction between them was very entertaining. The story itself was rich with detail, I felt like I could see everything that was happening. Thanks so much. I'm off to read part 4 :D

I really enjoyed this series so far (3 chapters) but this was my favourite chapter. But then being a Murdock and a plane/chopper fan that's not really surprising ;-) This was very well written and as I've said of the other chapters I enjoy the army lingo being included - much more interesting.

Very cool! This series is interesting, portraying the Team before they were nearly as "extreme" in some of their behavior as they were on the show (guess being on the run will do that to you).

This is a great story so far. I have read it twice! It did state that it was the second in a series but I can't find the first. I can't wait to read what you come up with next.

Hey, I really like this story so far! You're doing real good! I like stories about the guys in Vietnam and I'm especially looking forward to reading how Face joined the team. So, don't leave us hanging too long, okay?

Greets Monika

This was a great story....I hope there's more to come. I love speculating on how the team met, and what Vietnam was like for them. You did a really great job making it realistic.