I really like the plot device of the flashforward/vision things. I think they created a really good effect within the story. And your characterizations and writing are still awesome.

This was one of the best ReBoot fanfics I have read. I think you did an amazing job of gettings everyone's personality accurate,especially Matrix and Hex. I liked Enzo in this story, and I thought it was kinda sad, but expected, that he was in love with AndrAIa too. Having the story set in two different time periods was really effective, not at all boring. I tried to print it out so I could read it whenever I wanted, but it was way too long. Iprinted 36 pages before my printer started to screw up. It was only the samallest portion of the story that I printed! Anyway, great job. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Awww... the end was sad... I had just recalled those events to a friend... almost made me cry. I hated that game... damn the User! ~J~

Ahh! The Simpsons! That's hilarious! ~J~

*wow*...that was awesome!! i loved it! very well writtened!! i love this story!! write more like this!!!!! ^_~

Wow! the enzo and matrix relationship is really well developed. i love all of it. actually i cried(just a little)when dot died. its not the fact that she died its just how well you put it together. i love your style of writing and any writing that trades off like that. it give the writing a little mystery.

the relatinship between Matrix and Enzo is so well devopled. I'd forgotten how much I'd enjoyed this part, as I continue my rereading.

Is it just me or are your versions of the characters awfully ** themselves?? No offense, its just something I noticed...

I've read both Abort, Retry, Fail, and Null and Void, now and they are amazng. The characters behave exactly as you would expect them to from the show. It must have been difficult to do that, especally Marix and Enzo, but somehow you pulled that off masterfully. I especally liked the suprise endng, and I'm glad it turned out happy just like it always eventully did in the shows. It was clever making Phong's dream seem like the end; it totally thrugh me off and made me sad that it was going to end like that. I really hope you will write the next chapter of the war with Dameon, I would love to find out how Mainframe really defeats her.
!!!!!!!!!PLEASE CONTNUE THE STORY AND TELL US HOW MAINFRAME DEFEATS DAMEON AND SAVES THE NET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is a GREAT story!! I love the Simpsons Game cube!!

This is SUCH a good series. Dammit, if I didn't have to go to sleep, I'd read the other/new series! Wicked good tale...

*silent shock.... hits the back button and clicks the 4th ep*

*laughs* I loved the Simpsons part! And Hex! WHOOOO!!!!!!!! I'm off to see the otyher part, the wonder other part of Oz! lalalalalala.... *sings off tune*

Wow. I mean...wow. That was I think the best fanfic I've EVER read...and I've read a lot of them. That story was amazing! I ACTUALLY CRIED when Dot died! Is there a sequel? Please tell me there is. You have a lot of talent and potential to be a really good writer ;D Keep it up!

Nifty!