A genre savvy evil overlord, one who would do well in Pratchett's Discworld or Lackey's Five Hundred Kingdoms. I like his operating style. One can only hope that he has taken into account the possibility of a 'niggly little detail' appearing from outside territory he can readily access, or a not so Light Warrior deciding to remove an obviously competent competitor...

^^ Well, I think you should continue this. Because obviously I'm one of your limited receptive audience, and this is funny. And accurate. Which is somewhat scary.

Can you imagine if the Warriors of Light were really cut down? Yeesh.

You're right, you're reading WAAAY too much Pratchett.
But since when has that been a bad thing?
BTW, when are you updating Odd One Out? Or maybe you have and my comp's just screwed up, again *glares darkly at screen muttering foul imprecations under her breath*
But anyhoo, good story.

--smile-- --chuckle-- --giggle-- --LOL-- --ROFL--
Surely you know that a large overdose of Terry Pratchett is the best possible nourishment for a fanfic writer's brain.

Good! Being of an evil genius bend myself, I like to see that some evil do-ers, just occasionally, show more cunning than those blasted heroes. Not to mention this sort of thing (going against the stream of narrative causality) really appeals to my jaded and cruel sense of humour, particularly when written in such Pratchettian fashion.

not dumb!! anyway fanfic author's brains aren't ALL that bad and Terry Pratchett is DEFINITELY good. and you've certainly made a good job of it.

LOL, I like it!!! I could definitely see the Pratchett thread going... I just finished reading one of the Discworld books, actually.