Simply wonderful. I think you did an amazing job at capturing the aftermath of the battle, what with the high-strung emotions and the uncertainity of what is to come.

The poem is equally amazing. :)

Wow, the action in this chapter was awesome. It constantly had me on the edge of my seat. I loved this chapter.

Amazing chapter. The message that Tracey left was so touching, and I'm glad that Ash and Misty have finally gotten together. :D

Woah, suicide pills. 0_o I didn't see that one coming...

Another awesome chapter. Your descriptions just keep getting better.

And poor Tracey...:'(

Wow, some intense stuff happening here! The whole mansion bit was absolutely amazing to read about, the way you wrote it was breathtaking! Poor James. I can only imagine how terrible it must've been to find his family home like that.

And now Ash has finally opened up to Misty, it looks like things will be hotting up even further...

I really enjoyed this first chapter. It was intriguing and you wrote the battle scene very well. I'm looking forward to reading part two and seeing how the plot progresses. :)

Fantastic. Ohh, I can't wait to read the other two books. I really loved this story. And that poem you wrote at the end was really great. That line where Mewtwo said he was teleporting away was kind of wonky, but when I start searching each and every line just to critique it, I know I've got something good. My main method of critiquing stories overall is examining myself at the end of it. How do I feel after reading this? A bad story, I am glad to be finished with it. A good story, I am glad to have read it. But a great story grieves me, because I loathe to see it end. I feel this was a great story. Thank you very much for taking the time and effort it took to write it.

Sincerely,

James

Wow...what an incredible read that was! This was truly an amazing work of art with an equally inspiring, jaw dropping plot that just seems to fit. Everything about this story screamed suspense; and what's more is the yummy romance you threw in there masterfully! This was great and now I'm off to read Book 2!

really like this!

This was pure liquid ownage.

awesome story! i'm surprised there are so few chapters...and I may have missed that explanation somewhere but cool. I enjoyed this a lot- can't wait to read the next one!

I decided to read this story because it has a very interesting plot idea, but I have to say, I'm having trouble getting past the first chapter. Hardly anything (mainly pokemon names) is right. But I can overlook that. But there is one thing I can't overlook, and it's not so much that you did it, but that no one else noticed it. Seriously, out of all the pokemon fans reading this, I'm expected to believe no one noticed? Pikachu cannot CANNOT evolve through experiance. Pikachu can only evolve with a thunderstone and has already decided several times not to, but even so, Pikachu just cannot evolve any ol' time it wants to. Not possible. I will TRY to overlook the fact that you wrote it and no one noticed it, and TRY and read the rest just because I like the plot idea.

*Blinks* Wow... that's all I can say...

You're such a wonderful writer it's unbelieve how good this story is!

Great chapter, i only got one thing to say, Umbreon is a dark type not a ground. Overall great start.