Nice. :)

I think u should...UPDATE!

wow, writer's block? who're u kidding? this story is WONDERFUL please continue! there HAS to be another chap. or something...this is AWESOME! KEEP WRITING!

Cool story! I like it. Only one thing I must inform you of is that Peter Pan belongs to J.M. Barrie, and the rights of the story belong to the Great Osmond Street Hospital. Well, bye.

Do you know that this is the exact picture that I had in my mind of what happened after the Disney movie ended? Seriously, it was really cool to see somebody else wanted it to end that way also.

Well written! I recognize Peter in this; and the fact that's he's grown up without meaning to. Very realistic. Good job!

! That is too sad! ::wipes her nose::

Tink was very well written, and you had me crying the moment she said, "Stay." The whole thought of Peter growing up and forgetting is so heart-wrenching...

I think I'll go have a good cry, now. Please add more if you planned on it!

I love it! It is just what I desire to happen to Peter.

I liked this a lot, but you should use paragraphs.

I like how you presented Tinkerbell. Nicely done. I like the story as a stand-alone, but I don't like the concept of losing Peter to adulthood. *tear* Very nice. ;)

I was just HOPING there's at least a story that has Pan wanting to grow up to BE WITH WENDY! I'm SO glad I stopped here...please continue! I wanna read more! Pan/Wendy FOREVER! (Too bad they are not...in episodes AND the HOOK movie...*sniff*)

sweet but depressing :( . well, add another chapter ifya plan to, i think ya could!

This is a good story. I loved it!

ACK!:p A peter grows up story..Well written, but then, I never did like the grows up stories. Hook was an okay movie though, but only becuase it never touched the real story to me. After all, the whole point of the story (and the very very first title of the book) was "The boy that never would grow up" and it sort of goes against everything Peter Pan is to have him think otherwise, since he is the soul of youth...

Started well, and I can't wait for more! _