 Quibblette 2002-08-30 . chapter 1I love it! Especially the line with Ron thinking: Harry, you need a cloak to become invisible. I just need to walk next to you. I've been trying to explain that feeling that I think Ron feels for ages and you've done it perfectly! Captured the 'essence of Ron'. And Hermione, she was so in character she was real. With her ideas on Luck and God. It was, I don't know, it was just WOW! This is getting added to my favourites list! |