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| Musette Fujiwara 2008-02-17 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome... I loved it how Piccolo interfered... |
| orphan mia 2006-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI am so glad that you put in Piccolo. I can't breathe I am laughing so hard. Write more! |
| Garowyn 2004-07-25 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! Different than most B/V fics. Poor Piccolo! |
| leelo 2003-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abusealright! piccolo is in this fic! i love it when hehelp b/v! i mean seriously he is on my top 3rd fav characte. b/v share number 1 and 2! yay. i means eriously piccolo is everywhere! i mean in the show u turn around and go ohhi piccolo how've u been. or like he always saves everybody, or how he was there at bothof veggies deaths. or..how e hear the fate of b/v with his little eavdropping thingy. but i love the story. |
| master vegeta 2003-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh wow. that is the most amazing short story i have read on this site. this one IS the best!! the descriptions, and the little bit of humor, and the way you wrote vegeta's feelings! oh it was all great! |
| Veggie-runt 2002-12-29 ch 1, | abusehehehehehe!!! Piccolo the matchmaker!!! hehehehehe! great story! I loved your plot! that's 'bout it... |
| This Account Is So Old Wow 2002-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI thought it was very original and humorous. Poor Piccolo. Having to listen to that. Shudder |
| Christina G. 2002-11-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseif they were mated, wouldn't Vegeta have saved Bulma and baby Trunks in the android saga when the Dr. Gero 'droid blasted the air car they were in? just thinking out loud. anyways very cute or kawaii! you know what i mean! |
| cdkobasiuk 2002-11-03 ch 1, | abuseI love how you wrote Piccolo. Most people dont' get him but I believe you actually do. Tangerine. An interesting expletive. I try and swear like comic book heros, "Holy cow Elbereth in April !" Unfortunatly I am not always successful. As for Lemons, they are fun but humor is more important. |
| Book Worm 4.0 2002-10-26 ch 1, | abusehmmm...well, i don't agree to anything you said about Yamcha, even his cheating on Bulma, but Piccolo!!!! PICCOLO WAS JUST HILARIOUS! "It's just, you're being so loud..." *cackles* that was the work of a genius! |
| junjun 2002-10-25 ch 1, anon. | abusei was wonderingwhy you kept writing tangerine, you could have wrote kuso (japanese swearing) but whatever. great fic. i've read a few of your stories now and they've all been great. yamucha that retard i wouldn't put it past hi mto hit on vegeta. kind of freaky though cuz i'm not a yaoi girl. |
2002-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseTANGERINE?! |
| SS2 Female Gohan 2002-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseYep! That's right! I'm reviewing again! I still love this story! I thought was hilarious! I feel so sorry for Piccolo and his favorite meditation spot, I think Bulma and Vegeta will be making out there for a very long time!LOL!I hope Yamcha really got the ** beaten out of him by Vegeta, Even thogh Vegeta is really sexy! P.S. Teenage Gohan is reall sexy too! |
| SerenityZero 2002-09-07 ch 1, | abuselol I loved your fic :) I'm gonna go see what else you've written c(o; |
| Kahlan Nightwing 2002-09-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou are now officially in my fav author list! This was great! Wonderful! I share in your addiction, although it's an obssession. Continue writing. I will continue reading! I simply loved Piccolo in this. Especially the last! lol! Yamcha hit on Vegeta! You should've had the fight scene! I would've loved to see Yamcha beat up.... |