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| IMHO Nienna 2006-06-17 ch 6,  | abuseLOL! This has gotta be the best take on Forge I've ever seen hardee har har man you sure got it right that boring man! I haven't laughed this hard in a good long time this is a pretty good story. |
| IMHO Nienna 2006-06-17 ch 5, | abuseLOL! That last line was priceless! |
| chichi's1fan 2005-11-11 ch 15, | abusegood story |
2002-10-19 ch 15, anon. | abusethis is sooooo beautiful. again you have done it and it is off the hook. oh my god where did you learn to write like that. il ove ororo stories and everything about her and the guys that are just crazy about this goddess. Please tell me that you're writing a sequel to this right?? (hint:please say YesSSSSS!!!!!!!!) it was great. thank god for writers like you!!!! |
| razzamonkey 2002-10-17 ch 15, | abuseAhh...Beautiful & poignant. You surprised me with the ending, but I like how you weaved the tale. I'm expecting a sequel from you, immediately! ;-) --"nina." |
| rhapsody (nsi) 2002-10-15 ch 15, anon. | abusesorry to see this end but ya did a nice job with it. |
| Verena G 2002-10-15 ch 15, | abuseAn open ending full of hope! I love it! It somehow feels totally right! I like the fact that Logan is so understanding about Ororo having to find herself! That´s how I pictured him! I will be looking out for your next fanfic!:) |
| Jubes2681 2002-10-14 ch 15, | abuseWell, I just absolutely loved this story from start to finish. I hope you do a second part with Ororo returning or finding herself or something! Either way, I truly enjoyed this story - Bravo! |
| Verena G 2002-10-09 ch 14, | abuseInteresting theme: Ororo, the woman vs. Ororo, the Goddess vs. Ororo, the girl. That woman sure has some major issues to deal with! Oh no, do I see thunder clouds forming between Logan and Ororo?! That Forge is sooo cruel! Don´t let him get away with this so easily! |
| Jubes2681 2002-10-08 ch 14, | abuseI can't help but praise this story! I love it so much...Forge is finally seen as a HUGE jerk and I love it. Please continue soon! |
| Verena G 2002-10-07 ch 13, | abuseThis chapter was truely beautiful and romantic! I felt so at peace when I read it. Yes, I do feel truely good now!:) Verena |
| Rhapsody (nsi) 2002-10-06 ch 13, anon. | abusebeautiful. what song is that??? |
2002-10-06 ch 10, anon. | abuseoh my god, this story is so good. you just have to keep adding more and more to this story. i completely melted in every chapter. i cannot stress enough on how i.m loving this story. i absoluttely loved ororo and her stories period. pleaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssseeeeeeee!!!!!!!! write more on this and more abought beautiful ororo and the hearts of the X-men guys that she's always gonna steal!!! (it's great, pleeeeeeeaaaaassseee keep writing into this!!!!!!!!) |
| Sprinkles1 2002-09-22 ch 12, | abuseAhh! How sweet. Are those two going to finally hook up? Just curious, not meaning to be rude. Keep up the good work! |
| Verena G 2002-09-22 ch 12, | abuseTWO chapters at once! You really have been busy bee,haven´t you! I think you really made things even more interesting by adding Betsy as another player to the game. Logan´s choice not to be with her really proved what I knew all along, that he TRUELY loves Ororo! YAY! I KNEW SHE LOVED HIM, TOO. And besides, who could have resisted Logan´s little "attack". Again, I couldn´t...;) Now we have to get rid of that Forge... Let´s see, how about the earth opening up under his feed and swallowing him...nope, too easy... Oh well, surprise me... Verena |