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4/12/10 . chapter 19
This is a really good story. The plot is strong and unique. I'll be honest and say there were a few minor problems but these were just in either the sub-plots or the detail. For example the reason why Irvine was there. I could see why he was there from an outside view but really there should have been some explanation as to why he wanted to go. Also, and this one is teeny-tiny, there is the fact that the SquallxSelphie pairing just disappeared from the story. While i can admit that they may have drifted apart there should of at leat been some reference to them splitting up. Finally when Squall pulled the bag of coins from his coat it should have been referenced earlier in the story to provide a sense of continuity. However i say this with great respect for your work and i am more than certain that (due to the age of the fic) you'll have worked out these kinks in your writing. But please don't let my comments spoil your work, i thought that this was a great story and i did truuly enjoy reading it.
x Euphoria
4/29/09 . chapter 19
I skipped this story first because I never read it before and i'm glad that I did =). Very good story that I enjoyed very very much! I was sorta confused though when selphiexsquall just went kaput lol but it doesn't matter because im squinoa all the way :D anyways take care
XxPhoenix BladexX
11/4/06 . chapter 19
Well returning back to after a few years and only to see a handful of good new fics up, I guess I had to seek out the older ones that had me glued 4 years back and undoubtly yours was one of them. I cant believe how I could have missed reviewing this last chapter...sorry but I guess I'm makin it up to you now =)

Glad that you are re-posting Damned To Me. Though I can vaguely remember the story, I do however remember it was one of my faves so I guess i'll be hogging ya to update that fic soon now =)

Have fun writing and keep working those awesome writing talents of yours ;)
angel
5/28/06 . chapter 1
cool as so far.
Cerulean Crystal
12/25/05 . chapter 3
seifer's good.
Jayliyah
12/22/05 . chapter 19
Ooh, this was a lovely tale. ^_^ I definitely enjoyed it, and of course the happy ending is always the best part! The hero gets the girl, aw.. You have a creative imagination. Keep it up!
ynmy
1/2/05 . chapter 19
^_^;; heh, what shall i say? this was good~ yeay @_@
grdiang3l
12/4/04 . chapter 19
i love it. i read two other stories of yours and they are all so good. not filled with fluff, more of a plot to it, and just simply pretty. :D i love the pairings too! Keep on writing. it's great.
squally
5/29/04 . chapter 19
You are a great writer i love this story i could cry it good enough to be a book!
angel-brokensorrow
12/24/03 . chapter 19
it's really good. well wrtitten and well...u should write and update more often.Thkere are some flaws however they are very insignificant. Keep up the good work.
huh
11/4/03 . chapter 19
this is so good. this is one of the best fics ever! this is an awesome story and has one of the best storylines.

Good luck with future fics
Angelwingedprincess
4/16/03 . chapter 19
I luv this story! Especiallt the ending! You're such a good and talented writer and all your fics are great! Keep up the good work:)
Chibi-Cola
12/23/02 . chapter 19
I loved the ending. Very fairytale-ish, or however you want to call it. It was a great story, you did a VERY good job!

Cheers,

Cola
Silver Shadow
12/16/02 . chapter 19
The endind was lovely. The story is the greatest. Keep writing!
Rosa Magnifica
12/15/02 . chapter 19
that was a fantastic story. i really enjoyed reading every bit of it. i can't believe it's finally finished. i'm sad... :'( *sniff*

(at least i can still read your other fics)

you really made that story interesting and it was fun to read.

i hope you keep writing ff8 fics 'cos yours are gr8!

bye for now!
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