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Dude! This is hilarious! Ah, the over-used word hilarious... But it is! I mean, how many other people have written an alternative ending to the series? (Probably a lot, but I haven't gone that far back.) Anyway, great story!

Hanni B

TCLDOW

*On the floor laughing wiping the tears from her eyes* One of the best stories I ever read! Very creative!

"Please, sir, no! Hamutaro is a pure spawn from Lucifer himself! We refuse to put him in!"

LOL! Keep up the senseless spawn of evil late night rambling!

Fifi rhymes with Pipi. Remember that for yor next chapter.

Well, that isn't what I would think of a great ending for Pokémon... they should have stuck with what you said... that would be funny... _

That story was great, it really picked me up from being down in the dumps after having a virus... -_-

Anywayz, thanx, and it really made a different approach to the usual Pokémon endings fanfics!