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| Kanarah J 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuseHmm, this would have been a pretty good fic if you hadn't put yourself in it (Okay...a /version/ of yourself.) Jackie's kind of a Mary Sue character. *reads author's note from chapter 2* But it's good that you recognize this! (By the way, Mary Sues can also be a character you made up...geez, if you're trying hard enough they can even be the characters already associated witht the show...but I digress.) I personally hate reading them because I'm...like that, but it wasn't HORRIBLE. I'll give you that. :) |
| Ice Princess Xia 2003-03-30 ch 7, | abuseWow...I was just browsing for a short story to read before going to sleep when I fell upon your story and I must say that it was definitely one of the greatest stories I've ever read. I mean, you really keep the audience captured and always wanting to find out what happens next. Oh, my goodness, the ending was perfect I mean just utterly absolutely perfect. I am really just taken aback by how awesome your story is and I am never gonna fall asleep now. Lol! Alright well, this story is on my favorites list and I am going to check out your other works as well. Keep Writing, you are truely awesome at it. |
| Kimi-chan 2003-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat story but.uh..*sweatdrops*.you have a definate mary sue,here. |
| Music Chick 2003-01-27 ch 7, | abuseYea! Matt and Jakie sit'n in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-N-G!! *sweatdrops* Sorry, I just had to do it. The was cool beans! Cool fic, dude. Cool fic. |
| Music Chick 2003-01-27 ch 6, | abuseAAAAAAHHHHH! *jumps up and down clapping hands* Matt survived!! Yeaaah! I'm sooo happy! ^___^ |
| Music Chick 2003-01-27 ch 5, | abuseViolent, violent! My, my! Tai is here to save the day! YEeeaaaaaa!! |
| Music Chick 2003-01-27 ch 4, | abuseWait...so, Tai is giving orders to his mom? Wow. Not everyone can do that. And when IS Nancy going to find out about this? Boy, Malcolm is a jerk! Bad boy! No, no! |
| Music Chick 2003-01-27 ch 3, | abuseWho-hoo-hooo!! Dun dun duuuunnnn! The front door opens! Ha ha! This is getting goood! |
| Music Chick 2003-01-27 ch 2, | abuseWhy didn't Jackie tell Nancy what really happened? Was it b/c she wanted to talk with Matt first? I feel something building up hea'! ^_^ |
| Music Chick 2003-01-27 ch 1, | abuseUm, wow. Malcolm's kinda...drunk. What's his problem, huh? |
| yamatoforever 2002-11-02 ch 7, | abuseSorry that I missed the final chapter of your story. I'm glad that Mr. Ishida finally got what he deserved. It's cute and really sweet to think that now TK was the one who over protective to Matt. Well, it's a good story really. I really have a good time in reading this story. And yeah, you're right, I'm a girl. ^_^ |
| Kita 2002-10-26 ch 7, anon. | abuseWWWWAAAAHHHHH!!! This is soo happy! So sad! Boo hoo! SSWWWEEEEEEEETTTT! I luved this story. But Matt's dad IS actually very cool. |
| yamatoforever 2002-10-13 ch 6, | abuseI'm glad that you didn't kill Matt. ^_^ I would wait for the last chapter which I'm surely would be more than happy to see Mr. Ishida gets what he deserves! |
| yamatoforever 2002-09-28 ch 5, | abuseI hope Tai acted wise and did called the ambulance before he went to Matt's. You wouldn't kill Matt right, not after now there's proove that Mr. Ishida is really a bastard. And don't kill Mr. Ishida too, it's just too nice and easy for him! Please post the next chapter quickly! |
| yamatoforever 2002-09-23 ch 4, | abuseI can't believe the police only listen to one side in this matter! How could they do that? They even didn't give Matt time to explain. What would Matt do now? Please post the next chapter quickly! |