That was a promising start. Why not continue?

No freaking clue what the reference in the disclaimer is. Oh well. Anyway, I love the story, and those contests are pretty cool also. To bad I hadn't seen the story before it was to late, I might have gotten a prize. I'm extremely happy that you're not going to do that incest thing with Ranma and Ranko, that was disgusting in DC. I also think we need to see more of the senshi and moon cats, It's pretty much just been all Ranma and company so far. Not that I'm complaining or anything, far from it, but you might have an easier time writing something about them because they havn't been featured much. Maybe then the story will flow a little better.

Gambatte,
Ja ne.

Nice way to give a more defined history for ranma from one of your other fanfics so if you don't mind please keep writing you should have this one posted more because his already pre-scripted history.

You didn't put down happened to Khu Lon, though I suspect she died, didn't she?

great story

Joey Joe Joe Shabado: This isn't going to be a rant about that; if I wanted to write one about the characters' personalities, I would. As for Shampoo's death being cliched... you really need to read the author's notes for the main story. You don't know a lot of what happened. :-).

This looks interesting and I was wondering what happened to Ranma while he was in his original world. Keep it up, I want to see what happened to him while he was there.

^_^

Deathevn: Nope, you're wrong. Oh, and I won't count any entries posted in reviews, BTW.

So, in your quest to show us all the 'true personality' of butchered Ranma 1/2 characters, will this include Genma and Shampoo (Viz also screwed her characterization badly if you didn't realize).

No, wait, you already offed Shampoo in typical, cliche fashion.

Oh well. So much for that.

akane is a girl with a heart of gold and a temper the size of the grand canyon and also belives that there is some minor divine right to her being while kuno belives he has major divine rights. she more belives that just because she is realted to one of the best cooks of all time kasumi that she has divine right to be at least a good cook if not the best and with the art she had earned the title of best in her area and then the average power level of her area jumps up and the title is taken from her i would not mind if you qoute this to people you feel are being to ** akane she is not a total ** but she is no saint eather

dopamine is the chemical in your brain that allows a person to dream. agonist is a the term for production. so in other words you are dreaming. And by the way good start on this story, I want to see more of this and the origianal.

I have no problem with how you may plan to characterize Akane. The manga has her as much more reasonable than the anime -- or 90% of the fanfiction available -- would portray her.

Go for it. ^_^

This is going to be real good! I can't wait for more!