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harmony-of-mar
2008-04-22
ch 7,
abusei like this, its deep.
WizKid94
2008-03-24
ch 9,
abuse*claps* bravo. this is seriously one of the best stories i have ever read. keep up the good work! ^^

~WizKid94
Selonianth
2008-03-07
ch 9,
abuse*claps*
Music 1s my s0ul
2008-02-09
ch 9,
abuseAAH! *huggles*
Your story is so awesomley awesome!!
This is the fourth, count it, FOURTH time I've read this!!
IT'S AWESOME!
Ribs On The Run
2007-11-14
ch 9,
abuseAh... so good! I love these sort of romances! And the support of those important to you is really heartwarming isn't it?

Go Hinata! Knew you'd be the one who brought him back!
Arhazivory
2007-10-30
ch 9,
abuseWow...that was the most intense Naruto fanfic I've ever read.

Beautifully written. The sheer, raw emotions that every word displayed made my hair stand on edge. I loved it. I thought it was great.
Trapping Naruto in the confines of his mind, the way how we could know what was being said outside while being within his mind. It was so easy to visualise, no confusion at all about who was speaking. I loved how you wrote Sasuke and Sakura...hell, I loved how you wrote everyone.

As you can see, I'm just so impressed with this fic, it really hit somewhere deep inside.

You deserve a hug for this, but I guess I'll just settle with 'thank you'.
NirvanaSword
2007-10-13
ch 9,
abuseOMG the drama
Anzer'ke
2007-10-09
ch 9,
abusenice work
proud-to-be-crazy-4-ever
2007-09-13
ch 1,
abuseI read this before. Then I wanted to read it again. I spend days searching for it, and then I found the little search botton on the top of the page. *sight*
Metizalism
2007-08-03
ch 9,
abuseAw...i love the ending. It's so cute. :)

I also liked how when Naruto was depressed his mind was cold and they could feel his pain. That was a very interesting idea. Kyuubi is a little freak! I loved how you protrayed him though, judging from the couple of times he's spoken I would guess he'd be that way.

Very well written. i really liked it. Definitely a favorite. :)
sarah
2007-07-15
ch 9, anon.
abuseOMG! Love it! You really are a great writer. Keep going.
Midnighthurricane
2007-07-11
ch 9,
abuseAn amazing story. This is being added to my favorites.

100\100 A perfect score.
You get Midnight's seal of approval.
Keep up the good work.
death.by.college
2007-05-25
ch 9,
abuseAhh, good story *__* I like the pacing.. the slowly creeping but definitely steepening climax! Ah, was very skillful. You can just... tell. You're good. Very good. *heartheart!!*
death.by.college
2007-05-25
ch 8,
abuseAH! I was searching for a word that described how your writing felt to me, and I found it: honest. You've very honest, open writing. It's very true to what it represents. That's uh, that's something hard to attain. Congrats *cornball* :B ! *heart*
death.by.college
2007-05-25
ch 7,
abuseOh, good plot curve... Hinata coming back, and Sasuke being ejected by Naruto instead of retreating himself. It's good *o*
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