weird but good fic,but your grammar is quite bad

O.o Gon's creepin' me out. I dun think he'd ever change that much. But... it's a good fic! X3 Write more!

Yeah, nice fic and all since I LUV Killua+Gon things (put Hisoka and Gon 2gether, me KILL u!! ^_^) but BEFORE you continue, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE get a BETA! It hurt like H*LL 2 READ that! I was only readin 2 find somemore Killua+Gon parts!
This aint a flame, btw. The idea of the fic is good, but GET A BETA QUICKLY!
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WAAAAH! Well, tell your friend I want the next part, and soooooon! *sniffle* Poor Gon! Poor Killua! Awww!!!! I want a happy ending...

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... Interesting... You aren't turning it into a GonXHisoka, are you? *shudders* Hope not. Keep writing!

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... Interesting... You aren't turning it into a GonXHisoka, are you? *shudders* Hope not. Keep writing!