One day tommy and lil were having a movie night . Tommy really loved lil so he was going to tell her. Lil was at her house getting ready. Lil wore a pink dress with a pink cardigan followed by curly long,brown her and shoes party shoes. Then she packed pjs and a blue dress, culing wand,shoes,and a blue cardigan. Meanwhile tommy was wearing a one direction top saying"you make me beautiful and jeans a d shoes. Lil came to to,my house she rang the doorbell "tommy it's me lil said as tommy answered the she was lil deville "beautiful thought tommy lil looked at him "tommy ? Lil said questinally "oh said as he opened the door and slammed the the back. "So tommy be prepared for snowbird or beauty and the beast said lil as tommy replied "I like snowhite said tommy nervously at her. "Ok then pickles told lil in the pickles mode. Lil went to get food meanwhile tommy ran upstairs and made her a card when they were babies and when they danced tougher and wrote "to lil I love you so here is the card that shows i love you loved from tommy pick less xxxxxxxxxxxxx . He hid it as he saw lil in the bathroom putting lip gloss on. Then she went to get the fold out tent that she and kimi have and put their sleeping bags in there."there as she went to find tommy . Tommy tommy she cried the films starting tommy rushe drown just in time .lil and tommy watched the film tommy couldn't remember it at all. "Lil he saidlets play truth or dare said tommy as lil told him"but in the tent lil said as they went in the tent. "So Lil Truth otDare said tommy as lil said... Ddddaaarrrreee said lil as to. Y began Lil I dare you to say you love me then kiss me said tommy. "Ok Lil said as she told him "to be honest I love you for real tommy as tommy dragged her face and started to kiss her lil kissed him back then they started moving and kissing each others necks and then lil broke the kiss. "Tommy that was sweet the she saw the card and kisse shim on the cheecks "her said tommy and lil as he got a film camera and she got a dimaond tira with a necklace.

This is interesting. I'd love to read more!

i like so far plz write more but i think u got the chapters mixed up and also what do u mean by tommy hitting on phil and Lil

Did you skip a chapter, cause I don't get everything.

Short, but enticing(I think that's the right word. If not, just tell on me)

Update very soon. I goota jet. English homework.

(Mouth hanging and drooling. I'm such a baby)

Wow! Talk about a cross between Rugrats and Degrassi. Cool. But, if they're 12, with me 11, would she be doing that just yet. I'll pretend they're 14. But its still good.

This is really great! Pleez continue!

u HAVE to update it its so good i wanna know what happens next