Wow! it is excellent! very very nice idea! Are you going to update soon? I will be happy read next chapter...

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That was good...I must admit at the summary and then the beginning of the story I thought it was that he ACTUALLY WAS the traitor and it was AU or something...but I like this.

very good!

Cute little tale. You capture the spirit of the characters so well.

Whoa, this is really great. I'm exceedingly impressed by all your writing. Most of it seems to be about Lupin and Snape... are you likely to write something about Harry Potter? I was curious about what Remus could have thought of James's only child during PoA, any chance that you'll address that? In any case, I'd have to say that your writing has to be among the best on fanfiction.net.

Splendid job on this fic, but I have one thought on it. One of the passwords is "e-mail" and James carries a mobile phone. Considering MWPP era is usually considered the late 70s to 1983, it's unlikely that e-mails were thought of much. I'm not sure, but I don't think many people has good access to a computer at that time- not to mention I doubt there were many PCs.

Maybe it was different in Europe, but few people began to own mobile phones until the mid to late 80s in America. It seems doubtful that James would have one.

remarkably well done! full of intrigue! i love your writing of James... he's noble, but realistic. this is a great substitution of all the details that Rowling has left out about such things. one comment... i don't believe that mobiles were available even to Muggles in the seventies. hehe.

Nice story, and it's a good idea that Snape was a double agent all along. I always thought he was on the dark side, then changed his ways for a weird reason.

Sometimes I feel that reviewing your stories is quite useless. I mean, you've got hundreds already, what makes me think you'll even bother to read mine? Of course, I do have 135 reviews on one of my stories, and I've read them all, because they came quite gradually. Anyway, blah. That story of mine was dumb and doesn't deserve all those reviews... yours, on the other hand, are all wonderful! Very, very nice job.

Phenomal...but, of corse i shouldn't of expected anything else from you, Blaise!

u are definitely 1 of my fav fanfic authors. Keep up the good work!

If I assume correctly and this was set in the 1970s (since Harry was born c. 1980), using "e-mail" for a password to Diagon Alley is an anachronism. E-mail didn't exist back then. It's very jarring, all the more so when everything I've read of yours is so very well done.

glad to see another story in this. I loved Second Chance and this is a great follow up on that one

Hey, this was great work. I can't wait to read the next story in the series? BTW, why did you write these in different orders? Isn't that kinda weird? Well, ttyl.

~Sir Weston Weasley

you are now currently my fave author, just thought you oughta know