OOOO! Very good! I liked this alot!

Hmmm... it wasn't particularly intersting , but it was becasue it told about James and didn't foreshadow his death, like most things I'v read, or act like he was already dead. Good going!

This story is very good! I relly like what you did with it. You have a lot of talent. You should write another story.

It was very well written, but I can't envision James Potter being caught dead doing paperwork. :-)

That was really well done! I like the way it twists to fit with what we already know about snape.

That was a very well written and well thought out story. Great job!

You are so talented! I loved your story, it had such a good plot and a great ending, and it made perfect sense. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time, great job!

Wow, I really liked that. I love pre-Harry stories- write more!

That story was really good! Lon, but great! Now I have to go and read your other stories!