I can't wait to read more, you should write more soon.

I like this! It is a bit fluffy, but I like happy stories.

You commented on needing to write Spike better. What I found helps the most is reading the transcripts. Just throwing in luv, pet, bollocks, etc... doesn't work if he talke like a californian the rest of the time. ;-) Not saying he does in your story, but you get the idea.

Buffy Dialog Database is great . And Psyche's transcript site .de/

ummm are you aware that your chapters are backwards? chapter 1 is uploaded as 2 and vise-versa

Great story! I always love when people make Buffy happy about coming back to life! & spike is so cool!

great so far.

he always there for a good buffy'n'spike lovin with a story, but do you honestly think she just came crawling out of her grave after she died in a kind of depressed and grown up mood saying hey good to be back, how do I look, and everything's ok again? I don't know about that. for the rest of it it's a good story, it has SPIKE :)!

keep up the good work!