this is an awesome story. very sad, but i loved it and just couldn't stop reading 'till the end. great work! :D

I suppose pin pointing humans' most grotesque flaws happens to be your hobbie... I like it. This is the most engrossing (and disturbing) story that I've come across. Something to keep me thinking about and have nightmares over. I still feel a tad disturbed...
Anyway, thanks for killing Zim and keeping Dib alive.

I liked this muchly. It was disturbingly true, aside from the.. physcotic killer. And for the record, I KNEW IT! I KNEW THE KILLER AL ALONG! :DD:D:D:D I am proud. Poor Dib, that would uh. Suck. Badly. And there's a girl in my class named Jessica who is... exactly like the Jessica in your story. Interesting visual there. XD Anyways, again, I liked it. :D Good job.

No I'm not a Marilyn Manson fan. Nothing on this earth will make me appreciate that attention-seeking social leech. I DO like NIN mind, and the very last line of "Star**ers INC." was actually the inspiration behind this.

I'm submitting a review of my own story. Is that bad?

Brav-o, and well done. There aren't many stories that would keep me reading for 27 chapters, since I'd never seen this one before.

Actually it sounded more NIN than Manson near the end... I dunno. I think the ending was really neat. I think they would have realized the will was fake, though.

Poor Zim. That was so sad... well... unless you're an Irken, that is.

Brav-o, and well done. There aren't many stories that would keep me reading for 27 chapters, since I'd never seen this one before.

Actually it sounded more NIN than Manson near the end... I dunno. I think the ending was really neat. I think they would have realized the will was fake, though.

Poor Zim. That was so sad... well... unless you're an Irken, that is.

Just curious... are you a Marilyn Manson fan? The New Gods section and the Beautiful Ones remind me of some of his writings. Not to offend you if you aren't, some people get so sensitive about stuff like that.

Very neat and philosophical. You have good insight on human nature.

*gets teary eyed* I...I luv yuu.
This whole story was AWESOME! I completely didn't expect it to be Alex! I expected it to be someone in the mainstream group. Rock on, rocker.

Crap that was long. But it was really good! Really, really, really, good!

LMAO! Scully's a scientist and i'm a psycopath. dat's funny. and she's right, Zim isnt exactly the homocidial type

well i guess the girl i was talking about has been dubbed, by you, Peg. this is a cool story,

it's got to be that jessica person, the one that called Zim Zip. the blonde bitchy one.