i do not under stand this story one is i don't like it because it not ayeka-centric

Nice job with the Nobuyuki scene. It's good to see someone writing a poignant moment for such an underappreciated character. More please! ^_^

*whistles slowly* Veeeeerrrry nicely done!! I don't see anything wrong with this story! Everything about it is great! Hopefully you will continue this, hmmmm? please? Your decision.


-Akemi Akibi a.k.a. The Green Sonic Monkey Inc.