 Hocapontas 2009-08-10 . chapter 21I gotta say: with all of these different Harry's around it's going to get VERY confusing! In the end I'm hoping that Lily, James, and Blaise will stay in this dimension. I mean it's not like they have anything back in their own dimension. I am REALLY looking forward to the next chapter!! |
 jemovampiress 2009-08-06 . chapter 21that better not be the end! that would dissapoint me to no end if it was. |
 Jimbocous 2009-07-09 . chapter 21Fascinating story in may respects. I know it's beena long time, but do hope you get back to it at some point. Well roth the read. Thanks! |
 Hannah42992 2009-05-24 . chapter 21oh yeah. ron and hermione have missed something important. will the harry's be able to convince dumbledore of the truth of hat happened? will they defeat the voldemorts? great job... please continue with it...=) |
 Ktoddhim 2009-05-02 . chapter 21I love this story and hope you update. Keep up the great writing!! |
 iamtherealmaverick 2009-03-05 . chapter 21Gripping! A bit in this chapter felt a bit rushed, but the reunion between Snape and Blaise was absolutely touching.
I really hope that you pick this one up again and that it hasn't been totally abandoned. Please?
~M |
 Kaitlyn 2009-02-14 . chapter 21 Alternate universes/dimensions, time travel, mystical beings replacing their big sisters, four Harry's, Severus Snape as Harry's father, lesbians, fights, monkeys, gay threesomes, necomancy, reincarnation, birth day cake...this story just about as confucing as it is amazing. As much as I wish that you will continue with this tale, I must admit that my hopes are not that high considering that the last time you updated was in 2004...five years ago. But, on the off chance that you do continue, if it wouldn't be too much trouble, please email me at LicoriceFiend@live.ca I really enjoyed reading this and would love to find out how everything ends... If you ever need a beta for a fan fiction, I would be honoured to take up the position. :)
~Kaitlyn |
 JonasBandFan 2009-02-10 . chapter 2...im confused. there are no "..." in this. so hard to read. |
 Kalimada 2008-12-26 . chapter 1Honestly the lack of quotation marks has prevented me from reading any more than this one chapter. I don't think I can force myself to dredge through nine chapters of it. I appreciate the effort and all, but you have no excuse to not have proper quotations. |
 wolfzmasterz 2008-07-07 . chapter 21i like the story although it can be hard to follow at times it is still good cant wiat to read more and see how harry changes the dager back to his well i read ya later byb |
 SpringCherryBlossom 2008-05-25 . chapter 2Gez...hell I'm confused! U keep switching scenes and pov all the time. U also do't have any ".." to show talking so i kinda lost track of who and when ppl were talking and thinking about!! |
 cyiusblack 2008-04-23 . chapter 21update soon |
 sanityinquestion26 2008-04-10 . chapter 11 Oh my GOD!*screams in absolute delight* Your story is so...perfect! And if I ever get through this story (I'm currently at the end of Chapter 11) I'm going to be so *sad*. And, trust me, you're not the only one who feels *weird* reading H/G. I have no "issues" with Ginny, per se, but the whole relationship is so cliche, I mean COME ON, Harry falling in love with a woman with red hair, *just* like his mother...Plus, the whole thing has creepy undertones of Harry really just being in love (in a mother-son way) with Lily and wanting a relationship with her, but since she's dead (necrophilia, too!) he's subsituting her with another red-haired woman...And there was the whole "creature in his chest" thing in the HBP...
Well, I didn't mean to make this about *me*, but your story is totally amazing, and while I usually tend to despise OC's with a hatred I only hold for those who paint Snape as an atrocious monster in their stories...I LOVE LUCIA! And, its very amusing how no one has put all the pieces together about Harry and Snape yet (but I'm only on Chapter 11). Safe to say, your writing is completely addicting...*hands over many metaphoric cookies* PLEASE KEEP WRITING! |
 Owl344 2008-03-18 . chapter 1This is a brilliant chapter! I loved it.
However, there are two small things which would make it much better. They're not so much in the way of plot as in the way of putting in quotation marks and apostrophes, so you can tell 1) When someone's speaking, and 2) When someone is saying...well, for example, he'll instead of hell. |
 lunar_scythe 2008-03-08 . chapter 21 Hi, I just re-read this story, and was wondering if you ever plan to complete it? I love it, and having read over 1,0 HP fics(yep, over 1K of them, lol!) I haven't found anything similar to yours. Actually, that's true for Coexistance, too, lol! |