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zhiro naruto
2009-12-06 . chapter 25
great! alhough there isn't any other chaos in ranma's life.. not as much as usual. i'm not saying that ku lohn or shan pu would come, but there's usually something attacking ranma, someone in love, or something happening around him.. which, by the meeting with the amazons, looks like he got off easy compared to future encounters.. but i don't write. anyways, your fic is high quality either way.
Midoriryu
2009-12-04 . chapter 25
Nice to see more of this again. I get the feeling that the Umbreon, after a break in time so to speak, will fit in rather well.

Will there be any effect on Pio's attitude as a result of Dian's comment about her not being alive if Ranma were the type to do as she suggested a few chapters back?
Hiryo
2009-11-25 . chapter 25
And I'm really glad athat you continued that fanfic and look forward to much more there!
Bobboky
2009-11-22 . chapter 25
very good
Julianmon Again
2009-11-21 . chapter 25
I've noticed that we've seen none of the three amazon's pokemon. I've got a few suggestions.

Crescent
1. Roserade
2. Medicham
3. Flareon

Pliarah
1. Mismagius
2. Breloom

Cuttar
1. Raichu
2. Tauros

I also suggest that you change sycther to heracross for the team you are planning.
Julianmon
2009-11-21 . chapter 25
I guess those eggs are elekid eggs, brought in the hope that Ranma would teach at least one and if more, why the more the merrier. I'm guessing that being chosen to be on Ranma's team is now a high honor among the clans. I would personally suggest that ypu get a plant or water pokemon on your team. I think maybe treecko and buizel, or Vileplume. You should probaly have buizel due to water pokemon rarely having arms, or you could choose totodile. Maybe a Psychic Pokemonor fighting pokemon. Abra or Tyrogue.
Dian- Normal
Pio- Fire
Umbreon whose name I forgot - Dark
Water?
Plant?
Psychic?
Fighting?

Also great for continuing and make you chapters longer.
keichan2
2009-11-19 . chapter 25
Thanks for the new chapter.

I wonder what you intend for the three Amazons, because, even though Ranma, Dian and Pio did not leave tracks to follow, you will have the girls find him by following the "way pointed by the Goddess"... (had to read again the previous chapters to remember the characters...)
I also wonder how Ranma would react if one of them were to try and ball one of the pokemons he trained...

Anyway, I hope you will update soon! Please? (Or I'll tell Pio that you insulted Ranma... ;-p)
Tri-Emperor of The Twilight
2009-11-18 . chapter 25
Great story.
sh8ad8ow
2009-11-18 . chapter 25
funny story.
Rey6
2009-11-12 . chapter 25
Now this is nostalgia right here. I must have been like, 11 when this fic first came out. I just reread it last night and it really took me back. To think, back when this was a new story it was actually unusual to have author's notes. it almost makes it seem like this if from a different Era in fanfiction. But I digress. I love your story and I'm glad you're continuing it. With this update I have hoe of seeing one of the few completed Ranma/Pokémon crossovers. You'll be making your mark in fanfiction history. I'll definitely be following this one.
neb1234
2009-11-12 . chapter 25
you're ** me, I thought this was never going to get updated!
Awesome man
Firehedgehog
2009-11-11 . chapter 25
giggles evilly
swet awesoem update
Riniko22
2009-11-11 . chapter 25
Cute and an enjoyable story. Looking forward to your next chapter when you are ready.
vasilidor
2009-11-10 . chapter 21
i like shitake shrooms!
they fill me full of fumes!
watch me clear the room!
SHITAKE!

by the way chapters seventeen and twenty dont seem to work.
nice story though.
firelordeg
2009-11-10 . chapter 25
thank you for sharing this fantastic chapter i love this story im glad to finly see an update please update again a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows
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