Thats a wonderful story.
OK, maybe wonderful is the wrong word for its slightly disturbing content - what I mean by that though is that it is very well written and also very imaginative - it hadnt even crossed my mind that Dent may have had sexual motives in imprisoning her during NML.
You present some extremely interesting similarities between Harv and The Bat... ones that really do begin to make you think.
Your writing also made my heart break for poor Renee. When will life give her a break?
Very well done.
=)
Travis

I really like this story. I hope that the new Gotham Knights series focuses heavily on Montoya -- she's one of the best Batman supporting characters.

This story is poignant and told with just the right amount of distance to make the poignancy that much more touching. Great job, TC.