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| KitsuneOverlord 2007-11-14 ch 6,  | abuseGood story. Sesshoumaru!Ranma is pretty cool. And when you said AU and OOC, you meant it, I've noted. Though, two things bugs me. Why haven't Ranma asked Herb to lock him in his cursed form? It is much more powerful and with Ranma's new personality he should be much more comfortable in it. Second, will Ranma and Sesshoumaru merge together into one being, if Sesshy really is alive somewhere inside Ranma's mind? (I don't really like the entire having an extra person inside ones mind stuff. for some reason, it ** me off like nothing else. maybe I have a phobia against multi-personality disorders?) Keep up the good work! |
| ApocSM 2007-04-25 ch 6, | abuseWOW! I LOVE THIS STORY, MUY BUENO! YOU DID A SUPERB JOB ON THE PLOT! UPDATE REAL SOON! |
| LunaRoseAF 2006-08-01 ch 4, | abuseThis is an interesting fic, but I have to say that your spelling and grammar is... not very good. Do you have a beta reader to help you edit your chapters before you post? |
| Drkjester 2006-02-16 ch 6, | abuseWould love to see an update for this story. It is the best Ranma/Inuyasha crossover i have ever read. |
| Athenais 2005-07-17 ch 6, | abuseCould you please consider it to update this story because it was really nice reading it. |
| Anonymous 2005-06-18 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis is one cool fic! Please update! |
| Chaos 2005-05-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat storyl.Update soon please. |
| Patrick Wilson 2005-04-27 ch 6, anon. | abuseI encourage you to keep writing on this story. You have a unique Inu Yasha and Ranma 1/2 crossover. However, I for one would like to see exactly how Ranma fights his battles. Some suggested enimes might be Sesshomaru (cant spell it) since he is a deamon as well. I would also like to know what happened to all of Inu Yasha's traveling companions. Maybe they can have a place in the story too. Finally, I totally 100% support your treatment of Akane seeing as I am an Akane hater as well. But I would suggest that you do not kill her too early on in the story. Also, I think you should include Moose is this series seeing as you have Ranma beeting the crap out of a bunch of Amazons and I like you little randition of Herb. Thats all I have to say to you. If you want to respond then you can e-mail me at radpatch10@ Sincerely, Patrick |
| ron 2005-04-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseupdate would be nice |
| Fayt 2004-12-30 ch 6, anon. | abuseNot a bad story in and of itself. I must say, I have little knowledge of the Inu Yasha series and might therefore be unable to properly criticize this work. I find the ways you chose for various characters to be treated particularly amusing, as I myself am not particularly fond with the lot of them. If you read this review know that I am an obstinat reader and author to be, and that I enjoy some change in the styles of fiction that I read. All the best, Fayt |
| silver phoenix 2004-11-24 ch 6, anon. | abusePLEASE UPDATE!! I hate akane as well. She is such a spoiled little brat. |
| shinji the good sharer 2004-10-23 ch 6, anon. | abuseUPDATE! UPDATE! FOR THE LOVE OF ALL INUYASHA/RANM FICS UPDATE! ikari shinji |
| Skitty-san 2004-09-02 ch 6, anon. | abuseReally good story thus far. Has grammar problems as the author knows. I wonder if the rest of the Inu-gang will make an apperance? |
| rickW22 2004-08-27 ch 6, | abuseIt's a good storie keep it up . When are you going to add more chapter's |
| pitbull123 2004-08-11 ch 6, anon. | abuselove ran/sess attitude! Up-date soon please. |