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YaoiBatman 1/1/10 . chapter 4
I think you should take this story up again. I love the idea and it's very well written! Please update
Princess Sin 10/2/05 . chapter 1
i just read all four chapters of this story and i really

like it. i often wondered what it would have been

like if the others hadn't returned to their bodies

in the last eposide of Spell Wars. Anyway, i know

it's been a long time but i hope you update soon. i

really would love to see what happen nexts.
Xelena 2/3/05 . chapter 4
i have to tell you how much i love this story. it's very well thought out and i'm enjoying reading it very much
SamMan 1/29/05 . chapter 4
I love this story so please update it.
unknown 8/5/04 . chapter 4
HOLY SH*T! THIS IS A DAMN GOD STORY! Continue... OR ELSE!
Aoi Me 7/4/04 . chapter 4
I wish 'Callista' the best of luck in surviving the night. I suppose that Zaha will be making it up to 'her' later? I also wish Teno-Hikari the best of luck in continuing a seemingly dead story. You have fans, so give them something to munch on.
FFUltimaFighter 4/23/04 . chapter 4
its good but i want to hear more about school life and less about the zaha's and carrot's um... getting together.
sailoryaoimoon 4/9/04 . chapter 4
*cracks up* Oh lordy...Carrot in a dress and getting hit on by Count Potato Chips...it's too much...lmao
In any case, this story, much like the other two ZahaxCarrot stories...NEEDS TO BE UPDATED! I yearn to read new chapters of these wonderful fics...I've waited and waited...yet it was all for naught...I can only hope these great stories will be finished one day..
I'mamoron 3/24/04 . chapter 4
you must finish!
*foaming at the mouth*
Locura 1/22/04 . chapter 4
I know you haven't updated for a little over a year but I wish you would. I'd really like to see what happens in this story.
Katie 3/19/03 . chapter 4
::Screams in terror:: OH NO, not Count Potato Chip! Not his buttler! That guy is even worse! Anyway, this was a good chapter. Poor Carrot being stuck in an evil dress. I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Cody Thomas 1/17/03 . chapter 4
OMG! Carrot is in a dress! tee hee hee! More! I demand more! I have got to have more! This story is great! Please keep writing!
Sorcerer Huntress 1/9/03 . chapter 4
My god... you have no idea how much you made me laugh... Carrot in drag... ha! and This time there was Caraha! _ Mario bros. on drugs... this chapter was just too funny! _ *sighs from trying to hold in the laughter* *cracks* DAHAHAHAHA! *falls out of seat* whoo... funny...

"So... yoshi's a male dinosaur who lays eggs, right?"

**Cafe Latte
Sarryn 1/7/03 . chapter 4
Yays! Very good. Sorry about the lack of editingness on my part. Computer died with all my precious files on it.
icediamond 1/6/03 . chapter 4
I think the only possible reaction to this chapter is: BWAHAHAHAHA! Poor Carrot *sighs and giggles* I really do love the Carrot/Zaha pairing though, sadly enough. Great fic!
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