 TriStateCopFan 2008-08-10 . chapter 1That was a beautiful piece of writing. The title caught my interest and when I saw a reference to Smallville in the summary I figured I'd read, since I've seen a few episodes. I like the concise recitation of the history of events that brought them together and how they ultimately got pulled apart. I often wish when I read FF pieces like this, (POV's where the narrator is mentally rehashing things and being honest about his/her feelings)... that if only they'd put it all down on paper and actually give the message to their adversary, former friend, or whoever it is that they've wronged, what a difference it could make towards mending fences. Come to think of it, this could (and probably should) be done alot more often in RL too.
Very nice piece and, although not about Bobby Goren, is going straight to favs. ;-) |