M...It was wonderful.Just beautifully written.I love your slightly subtle descriptions.That was a beautiful story.

hey i saw revised so i decided to read again! you have captured Tomo's true feelings very well, excellent! where's the revised part though? keep writing Nakago tomo stuff.

LOVELY!!!! It's breathtaking!! The way you write is poetic, and it really puts one into the mind of the character. Wonderful story!!

Very nicely done. Nice diction.

Best. Fanfic. Ever.

Seriously. I shall keep this fanfic in my gilded pleasure palace, that it may amuse me at my whim.

Erm.. that is, I added to to my favorites list. Heh. ^_^

aah... I see... I understand now... O.O Shin would be proud

pretty nice, love the angst in the last 2 paragraphs.

that was breathtaking so much detail and it was so good my heart is pounch BRAVOBRAVO! its rare to see a fic like that ^_^ plz write more

That was very good... just... really... really... good. ::blink:: I mean...with the...and the...::thinks:: it was good.

Wai! I love this! :) Tomo rules! :)

Ow, this is sooo good!!! So beautiful, so well written that I "lived" the story while I was reading it. Really nice work! Hope to read some more from you. Keep writing! You have a lot of talent!

(teary eyed) Beautiful. Absolutely stunning. It is at times like these where I am at a loss for words. The intense love Tomo has for Nakago...portrayed in a way so dreamlike it is uncertain whether this is just the end or the beginning. (sighs) I was always a Tomo fan...
Ja ne! (flies away)