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Meca Vegeta
2007-12-05
ch 6,
abuseCONTINUE!...please?
SaiyaDude
2007-03-30
ch 6,
abusehi i dont know law and order but if it is lke what you have written here im missing out, anyway great fic, will it get better..?


no... ok then this is a good place to end not that many questions unanswered unlike your other fics
Nora99
2006-03-07
ch 5,
abusesince i can't review on the last chapter anymore have to do it on this one.
I just realized that you haven't updated in two years..(cryrollaroundthefloorsobsniff)
That really is too bad, it really is a wonderfull fanfic! Please don't leave it so unfinishes! Please update? Please? pretty please?
Nora99
2006-03-07
ch 6,
abuseWOW!! I love this story! Please update soon!!
Nora
Videl161
2006-02-22
ch 6,
abuseThis story is excellent! I really hope you change your mind and decide to continue this masterpiece!
TinkoTheGreat
2005-12-16
ch 6,
abuseWOW! Awesome chapter! that was really touching when gohan told videl that no one couldn't love her. AAW so sweet. well, your story is truly amazing! please update as soon as you can!
giggles5793
2005-11-05
ch 6,
abusei love the humor and characters. update soon:)
animemastr21
2005-09-18
ch 6,
abuseOk, I know it's been like 2 years since you last updated, but I've recently stumbled onto this story and I've fallen in love with it! Please, please, please update! I really very badly want to find out more and this is one of the best fanfics I have read! It would make me extremely happy if you would update. Please! It's obviously been very sucessful with all the reviews you have with the few chapters out, so why haven't you continued with this? Really, please write more soon! It'll be something for me to look forward to. You're a very good writer and this is an awesome story. So update please!
Ms. Videl Son
2005-08-11
ch 6,
abuseIt's such a shame that this story seems to be discontinued...sigh. You know, I usually HATE AU anime cop dramas, but I can't help but love this one. Sure, the characters can be OOC once in awhile, but for the most part they're not too far off the mark. Videl is stubborn, snippy and intelligent. Gohan is silently dark, eager to please and generally overwhelmed. Krillen never passes up a chance at a wise-crack...see? mostly right.

Anyway, I'm putting this on my alert list in hopes that one day this will be continued. Not really holding my breath, but I don't really have a long breath span anyway. Still, here's hopin...

Ms Videl Son
89
2005-06-20
ch 6, anon.
abuseUPDATE!
Tsubasa no Hikari
2005-05-25
ch 1,
abusefer cryin' out loud!! when r u gonna update this?!? i've loved the L&D show, and having a g/v to it makes it better! and i love how u made videl have little secrets of her own.
death to ken! kick his scrawny harry-potter-wannabe ** gohan! lol. i'm watching this story!
peachchanvidel
2005-04-07
ch 6,
abusePlz update.. plz plz plz ;_;"
the story is great~ I want to read more.. ;_;"
pleasee.. ~~
chibigoku4
2005-03-04
ch 6,
abuseI read aL your chapters in... i think now it's been a month or 2?? those chapters r so long but, i luv long chappies ^__^. the only thing i hated about this chapter was the cliffhanger at the end :( . ur keepin me in suspense here... u have achieved ur goal now pls cud u put the next chapter up PLS. lol :). but on a serious note, this is an exellent story and i hope u continue wiv aL ur other stories as weL. gud luck in the future.^__^.
p.s. i also wanted 2 ask, wen r u goin 2 put up the next chapters 4 'The Misadventures of Videl and Gohan'??
Luna's Meow
2004-10-09
ch 1,
abuseCan't believe I forgot about this... Update!
unknown beedee
2004-09-01
ch 6,
abuseawesome story!! and the humor could've killed me...hope you update soon
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