Nice. ^^

hey, that was pretty good!

FAAAALA! ^___________________________^ I liked this! Woo! Do more do more do more!

One question: "Blimey"?! Anyway... nice little interlude with the sisters. All fitting and appropriate, although someone should explain to Tira that she'd look better with red lipstick. (Yes, I know, symbolic. Still.) The bit with the butterfly keeps Tira from seeming stuck-up or anything, keeps her in chara, very nice... and of course, we've seen plenty of moments with Chocolat acting as she is here, so that works as well. Um. Yeah. ^^

Remember when Tira and Choco both made a play for Carrot in "A Sleepless Night"? Goes to show that they are not as different as one might think. It's too bad they fall for the same guy, ne?

Yea, the sneezing thing is part of the culture. Its a widely held sort of "old wives tale" kind of thing. I know the word, but i cant think of it right now. But yea, its not an anime cliche.

This is refreshing! I am NOT a fan of yaoi or heavy shonen-ai, so it is hard for me to find SH fanfictions that I want to read. I could never see Marron/Gateau as a couple (because Marron is always sweatdropping when Gateau shows him his muscles... at least in the manga... -_-; ). However, I'm a HUGE fan of Tira/Carrot.

All in all, good work. ;)

-Iapetus

The sneezing when people are talking about you is everywhere in anime, from Kenshin to Trigun. Anyway, this was really cute! Keep up the good work. ^_^

Cute!! ^_^ Like the ending!!! Twas funny!!!!! ^_^ Allergies... heh...

Cute. Short, but cute. I really agree that the 'Carrot/Misu sisters'-relationship is too often neglected in favor of the yaoi couplings we're all so used to. Do I dare hope for a sequel on this one...?