good grief.

you're trying to kill me, aren't you?! i knew it! i knew there was someone out there trying to murder me!

and now that my paranoi attack is over (somewhat) i would just like to say that i am lovinglovingLOVING your story, and i can't wait until you write more.

::enter my psycho side:: cause i'l have to hurt you, if you don't.

waiting for an update (quite impatiently),
nuke

I like your story although it is short. I can't wait for more. That was my subtle way of saying "WRITE FASTER!"

oh, ah!
Megan, I am impressed, I've never read anything by you, and this was quite good. I loved the tension of Sarah in the first chap. I think that was the best of everything. It's been ages since I've seen this movie, so I'm just a little confused about a few things, I do remember the pants. Who could forget those pants?

I look forward to more,
Jen

I will sick the Spatula of Doom and Mr Frying Pan the Man on you if you do not finish this story cause you have my attention and I want more. ^_^
Also nice use of evilness leaving us on cliff hanging for life waiting for that next bit of lovely torture. I like, write more please.

Wow, this is a great fic.PLEASE don't stop here, you have to write more.IT CAN NOT END! ok ok I am calming down.but write more pwease.for me :)

aw, i find it rather cutsie! and oh-so-downright ANNOYING that your teasing meh by just putting in small chapters and hinting towards stuff and not even DOING anything except hold my attention to the story! .
. dang. so, uhm. well, that's my way of saying 'continue', so.
. um.
. CONTINUE!

the ..suspense.. is killing me. *grins* come on, write the story already

Hey this is a cool story, i can't wait for the next chapter!

Gotta write more! Can't leave me hanging like that! I hate cliff hangers....Write more I say!

Like I said before, you are completely AWESOME! Please keep writing soon. I love it.
- Luv Rouko

Oh dear oh dear, I really hope you post another installation of this soon...I'm enjoying it very much.

Sarah's despair - and I can understand how the 'normal' world would drive her to suicide after the Labyrinth - and Jareth's apparent confusion (loved the 'how could I not?' comment) have been captured beautifully here.

Post more! Post more!

I love this story

more than simple porn? how can we stand it.... *ahem* up[date it soon!

oh oh boy i likey i likey more more please
its getting steamy in here *wipes some steam from puter so i can see when more ch are up *

:O Mmmmm... Wait...this seems like it's gonna turn NC-!7 but aren't banning those now? You naughty naughty person! Hehehe. I love it so far. I DEMAND MORE!! Errr...I mean...PLEASE?