 UnrepentantReader 10/2/02 . chapter 22 LOL! Honestly, even though you're always abusing the twins, it's so funny (; |
 UnrepentantReader 10/2/02 . chapter 21 Well, they've kicked me out...another great chapter! So Melissa's been getting private tutoring, too...nice touch, making her Patronus colored...they don't _all_ have to be white (or, if they are, we don't know it yet) *g* |
 UnrepentantReader 10/2/02 . chapter 20Oh, I love them! And I feel sorry for them, too, poor old Bode and Croaker. I loved this chapter, you did a great job. |
 Springrain 10/2/02 . chapter 24Ah, good. Kinda confusing, but good way to get them involved. |
 VMorticia 10/2/02 . chapter 24Oooo ... I love this. You know, I should probably review this more often. I think the thing with Uther in the wardrobe was really funny. I do enjoy the way you interweave this story with the real books, while still not affecting anything - it's all like it was but there's more. More cool things happening. I so want to know what happens next - does Bruce ever realise who that black dog was? Does the SSA find out which side Black's really on? Do they ever get to meet Black? Do they find out about Rat? Who dies for the Banshee? Who is Gina? Is there going to be a parallel to GoF after this? Have I mentioned that I love this fic?
More soon, please.
VMorticia; aka, She-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named |
 Raphe 10/2/02 . chapter 24 Now, how did Hogwarts get CS Lewis' Wardrobe? lol That part was great! Yeah, and um, so was everything else! |
 Lyta Padfoot 10/1/02 . chapter 24 The Blaise and Morag bit was hilarious. |
 Giesbrecht 9/30/02 . chapter 23Oooooooh... Now we get to the fun part! |
 thistlemeg 9/30/02 . chapter 23 Oh, you're killing me. Honestly, that is NOT fair. NO idea what's going on here...something to do with Sirius Black, Lupin, and the Trio? You've reached the end of the year, but there's still plenty to wrap up. I might die if you don't finish this within the week...God, I'm terrible with suspense. |
 Lyta Padfoot 9/30/02 . chapter 23 You evil author you, leaving a cliffhanger like that! I think I sniffled when Mervin had to let Gina go, it is always tough to say goodbye to a pet. Still curious about which member of Beth's family kicks the bucket. |
 Tarawyn 9/30/02 . chapter 23I still don't understand how I continuously lose track of this story. It's annoying my brains out. However, it means I get to read the story in chunks and I'm not so anxious...
Or I wouldn't be if you haven't have left a cliffhanger.
You potrayed Azkaban and the insane prisoners wonderfully. Rat, well, I'd like to kill Rat right now...but that's completely and totally unrelated to this story, so never mind that. I'm now reasonably sure that Richard considers himself an older sibling to Beth at the least; I'm not going to get into the most. And I don't have that much time for discussion, but that was flawless. Keep it up! |
 Raphe 9/30/02 . chapter 23 I believe you did that on purpose! *grumble* I hate cliffhangers. |
 Springrain 9/30/02 . chapter 21I'm not very good with lemon drops. Love them, but I have a tendency to spit it out accidently (dunno why, only with lemon drops; I'm strange),
curnch it, or swallow whole. So I wouldn't have done very well. Very cool chapter, though sad. Cool thing about the basilik wand. |
 Springrain 9/30/02 . chapter 22I like how you explained the OWLs. I am curious about James and Sirius
did to Snape. Poor Beth. |
 Raphe 9/29/02 . chapter 22 Oh, I really do hope that Luke gets out of Azkaban, although I'm seriously doubting it. And I feel so sorry for Beth with her mother and Chris being so far gone. And I just remembered. Someone in her family still has to die! Keep up the good work, I think it's obvious that you've got us all waiting in suspense. :) |