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| Katharina-B 2003-02-25 ch 1, | abuseVery good! I think you characterize them just right. I like the converation at the end between Adam and Jamie. There was one sentense I like most: Adam saying about Marie "My Ma. Joe's by birth." I think that shows he don't think family depends on blood bands, and that he really doesn't mean what he've said to Jamie. It's a very good story, I would like to read more! |
2002-11-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust wonderful. Thank you for this. |