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Reviews For: The Circle Drawn: Part 2 (Lost Episodes era)

Katharina-B
2003-02-25
ch 1,
abuseVery good! I think you characterize them just right.
I like the converation at the end between Adam and Jamie. There was one sentense I like most: Adam saying about Marie "My Ma. Joe's by birth." I think that shows he don't think family depends on blood bands, and that he really doesn't mean what he've said to Jamie.
It's a very good story, I would like to read more!

2002-11-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseJust wonderful. Thank you for this.
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