|Reviews for Merlin's Anger|
| Harper Rose Mitchell 3/17/13 . chapter 1
TAKE THAT, UTHER!
| me 1/16/13 . chapter 1
This is cool
| Shadow The Assassin 1/18/12 . chapter 1
| The Disorganization 5/26/11 . chapter 1
wow... just wow... so true so awesome...
| Scribbles111 10/3/10 . chapter 1
nice, its simple, straight to, and i like it, no idea y, i just like it...its one of them u just do! lool!
| the Goddess of Purple Coats 6/23/04 . chapter 1
You cocky miscreant, Uther! *laughs* Certainly suits him.
| Codfather 10/9/03 . chapter 1
| Night Flyer 7/29/03 . chapter 1
well, i thought it was a very good poem. you did an excellent job of capturing merlin's feelings that night and throughout the first few chapters of the book. i applaude you!
| Stella 5/12/03 . chapter 1
| amiwakawaiidesu 10/6/02 . chapter 1
As usual with your writing, a great strength of this piece is emotional intensity.
One specific device that's very effective is the splitting of relatively short sentences into separate lines (e.g., "Can't you see the blood/Pouring from my wounded wrist?"); that device produces an effect suggestive of a speaker who is angry, or hurt, or-at any rate-short of breath. The effect is dramatic and skillfully done.
| Fire Pendant 9/28/02 . chapter 1
Thnk you soo much for reviewing! My first review. I'm not coming back to Irish Sorry sorry sorry! Please read my other story and e- mail me sometime
| Chronic Daydreamer 9/22/02 . chapter 1
I liked it, it showed a lot of true emotion that spun itself directly from the book and gives you something to add. Thanks for a good read.
| Lune Luna 9/21/02 . chapter 1
Very Accurate for the time period it is placed, the wording fits into place, but one thing bothers me.. I cant quite place it though..
| Crystal-Velvet 9/21/02 . chapter 1
| FlamingWolf 9/21/02 . chapter 1
Come on, don't tell me it's so bad that no one's read it! Come on, R&R!