TAKE THAT, UTHER!

This is cool

EPIC!

wow... just wow... so true so awesome...

nice, its simple, straight to, and i like it, no idea y, i just like it...its one of them u just do! lool!

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You cocky miscreant, Uther! *laughs* Certainly suits him.

Very cool.

well, i thought it was a very good poem. you did an excellent job of capturing merlin's feelings that night and throughout the first few chapters of the book. i applaude you!

Cool -_-

As usual with your writing, a great strength of this piece is emotional intensity.

One specific device that's very effective is the splitting of relatively short sentences into separate lines (e.g., "Can't you see the blood/Pouring from my wounded wrist?"); that device produces an effect suggestive of a speaker who is angry, or hurt, or-at any rate-short of breath. The effect is dramatic and skillfully done.

Thnk you soo much for reviewing! My first review. I'm not coming back to Irish Sorry sorry sorry! Please read my other story and e- mail me sometime

I liked it, it showed a lot of true emotion that spun itself directly from the book and gives you something to add. Thanks for a good read.

Very Accurate for the time period it is placed, the wording fits into place, but one thing bothers me.. I cant quite place it though..

cool

Come on, don't tell me it's so bad that no one's read it! Come on, R&R!