Great story- though I don't have any ideas that you can add! Keep up the good work! And keep writing! I want to know the ending!

great story - thanx for reviewing mine

i cant be bothered to write any more!

cya,
izzy

Hey this story is a great idea! You really should continue it. Need ideas? You really don't have to take them if you don't want since you haven't written in a while but I'll help if you want it:

Maybe have Jon's or Alanna's kids go in search of the jewels. Then there could be easy love triangles and adventure.

Your ideas are great though don't give up on this story it's great so far! And don't worry about that whole Daja and Briar thing it's really just elemental stuff. Great Job so far! Please Write some more!

wow! cool. my brainwaves are never as good as this!

thanx 4 reviewing my fic.

i thort id return the favour. glad i did...this is gr8
!!!

i hav 2 mor fics up...which u mite want to read...*hint hint*

they r:

Dajas Choices by Starfire and Bluebell of Mindelan

Sephirah

plz R+R me agen! ^_^

keep goin...thi9s is totally awesome!

luv Bluebell

sorry i have no ideas, well not good ones anyway. I seem to have the same problem as you, but i'll get over it and probrably will to, it's just writers block.

that was really good! why didn't you tell me you were writing another story? *pouts* i hope you keep writing — i want to know the outcome, and if someone else takes over, it won't be you writing anymore. well, obviously, i guess, but what i meant was that the style and the plot will change because that's just what happens. anyway, keep writing!

sorry about the previous review I gave you (if you didn't get it, please ignore). My little annoying sister typed a few random letters and sent it.
thanx for reviewing my story. wait - you have the same problem too? they say there's more chapters but they don't give you a link? how did you find it out? what's the solution? can you tell me?
thanx
lady_atalanta

Hello again my friend.

Nice chap. I liked this one better than the first. BTW, are you going to have all three of them inadvertedly come together and the dominion jewel be put back together..? Just wondering. And, oh, please bring in the reg tortall chars. soon. Mainly Neal. Because I like him. And I don't know why, but I'm very hyper right now. So........ YEAH!!!! Right..... Write more!

*~Cami~*

awww...great start! the whole baby thing and the split of the jewel --> very creative.
i have that problem too, not being able to finish a story after i finish writing a couple chapters of it. but i am trying to force myself to finish my first fic that i have here.
i would love to work on this fic (of course, that's if i get struck with inspiration). or mayhap we could work on it together? (Unless you don't like my style of writing).
~Krizsta

Hello!

Well, this sounds interesting so far. I mean, I'm not sure if anyone really wrote anything about the Dominion Jewel yet. Well, actually, there were a few, but oh well. Please put romance in this fic, please please please! I love romance. It's so romantic..... *sigh* Did that make any sense whatsoever? No? I didn't think so either. Oh well. Keep writin!

*~Cami~*