This is such an amazing sequel to Otherworld. The characters & the experiences they went through connected so well. The way you brought in Remie again was awsome. He's a really great character.

He needs isapo...NOW! Will she be in here? cause I really hope that she is.

Yay! I was hoping that there was a sequel! reading on now :D

Amazing sequel to Otherworld. I loved seeing Auron go from being full of self-loathing, tormenting thoughts to being so free and loving. Noone deserved it more than him. Yay! And the conclusion was just perfect. I really loved hearing about Remie again too, he was a great character in Otherworld. I think I am now officially a BlitheringBard fan!

Wow. Oh wow. After reading Otherworld I thought I could never find a better story. But I was wrong. This is... there are just no words to describe it. Amazing. Magnifique! Fuf! You write with such descriptive language and colorful words that every mental image is clear and precise. I felt like I really was at the Farplane, that I really could feel the grass under my feet, and the wind in my hair. Brilliant. You captured all characters' personalities perfectly. I loved how you portrayed Auron - a little crusty on the outside _ but still a widdle softie sometimes, with my favorite type of humor - that wry, intelligent kind. Jecht and Braska were wonderfully portrayed, and extremely amusing. Isabo was a very believable character. I found her exuberant attitude entertaining. She actually reminded me a little bit of Rikku. Well, Melia was her aunt... Overall, I found this story to be one of the better fanfics I've read out there, though I think the Drama category should have been changed to Angst. I hope to read more of your stories about our favorite Knighty-poo soon! _

i loved this story and otherwold, too. They are both very well-written and I just love the relationship between auron and isabo.

Eterna and Otherworld contain one of the best characterization of Auron I've read so far. You choose a hard path; "old" Auron being a much difficult character to deal with than his younger self. Your original characters are great, too, especially Isabo. She's got a temper that fits perfectly the one of your "man in red".
Being a French speaker, I can tell that you placed the "writing level" very high. In the first chapters of Eterna, the descriptive parts are just music. The tempo is perfect, the chosen words are like harmonic if we let them play a little longer in our heads and the sentence's balance is majestuous. I suppose it's what we call a natural gift. Congratulation for having finished it, maybe it's one of the most difficult things in life.
By the way, your site is awsome.
I wonder how my miserable self managed to miss your stories until now.

Awesome fic! I read this all in one sitting.
I like Isabo a lot. Very interesting character and not MarySue-ish at all. For some reason I just KNEW she was an artist... *laughs*
I would have liked to see more interaction between Auron, Braska, and Jecht though... *shrugs*
Ayod

That was fantastic. You know what? I think I really like your stories. They're so perfect, amazing... *sighs*

Well, anyway, That was really good. If I could write like that, I'd be the happiest person in the world. And if I could DRAW like that... *eyes fuzz over*

Anyway, I hope you make more stories like this one, I daresay you are VERY good at them. Until next time...

SRNMY

All I can say is...wow. That was a beautiful story.

Aw. I love happy endings! *dances joyfully*

"Evrae's nether regions." Gonna have to remember that one...ROFL

Such an incredibly cool story! How do you come up with all these ideas? :-)

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Very well done. I am speechless.

*long, long, sigh* ...That was absolutely beautiful.

Thank-you for giving us this truly wonderful piece of work, and the very best of luck with future projects.

ah, but what would the world be without angst?

too much 'happy' can only lead to apathy and boredom. .